Reviews for A Fake Hero |
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![]() ![]() shirou seems to be going through a hard time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't really have any constructive criticism, I quite enjoyed the chapter as it is. Will be curious to see if Miyu and Illya eventually learn of the supernatural, and just how you'll mesh the DxDverse and the Nasuverse. |
![]() ![]() lol loved the taiga dojo segment |
![]() ![]() At least it's not Rias. Her route is Boring. I hope that is archer talking and not driag. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm, so Shirou may have just absorbed the Evil Piece without becoming a devil? I wonder if Avalon's presence created a yin/yang system in him, or if whatever entity that spoke there at the end ate it to heal Shirou. Lots of possible ways to play with that. I also enjoyed the original meeting of Kiritsugu and Irisviel with Shirou. Good reminder that these characters tend to do things differently than many would expect. Until next time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm, well that was neat. I hope that i'm doing this right but here it goes. name: welsh saber(I'm not good at names ok, sue me.) owner: an issei from the future where he did not become a devil(kind of like emiya) history: one day, isseis power of infinity was starting to leak uncontrollably to the point of constantly being in pain, that this worlds shirou and azazel tried to help create something to help work as a container and amplifier for the dragon power. effects: channeling dragon shots into a slicing/shooting attack, enchances natural speed and strength, helps control the power of infinity better, and can be used to upgrade the [BxB] for an original set of promotions. (note: can only be used by issei hyoudou with the boosted gear and will take around one month to fully integrate with the boosted gear. if used by anyone else, it will be useless, unless you have a dragon type sacred gear or some other connections; otherwise you can only charge some energy attacks. if used for a promotions, than you can summon the blade. the longer it's used may have some drawbacks on the person in question's lifeforce) type(is this the type of weapon?): anti-unit (promotion) looks:broad sword with silver blade, red guard with yellow trimming, yellow leather grip, and an emerald jewel at the pommel and where the guard and blade meet. do note that it's designed and themed after the scale mail. rank: B-A range: 1-50 maximum number of targets:1(promotion), 1-?(depends on who gets caught in an attack) I hope that I did this right, but if I didn't, please PM me. |
![]() ![]() i loved the scene with Illya screaming that Shirou is doing echii things with Sella |
![]() ![]() you know i thought that in the beginning shirou was rushed to the hospital, but it turns out that it was just a memory |
![]() ![]() lol I love how you write Iri Also i love shirou's reaction regarding Kiritsugu But if Shirou isnt a devil, then what is he? |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know, I was pretty annoyed with you last chapter for expecting Shirou became a devil and was added to Rias's peerage. You absolute troll. Not only was Shirou resurrected by Sona instead, but it is also under debate on whether he is actually a devil or not. Well played sir, well played. I wonder if there will be any pairing in this story or not. Since this isn't a Fate route Shirou who is devoted to Saber does that mean that he will activate his Eroge Protagonist powers for an unintentional harem? Looking forward to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES! FINALLY! A FANFIC WHERE RIAS ISN'T THE ONE RESURRECTING! FUCK YEAH! SUCK IT RIAS! *ahem* sorry |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shamshir-e Zomorrodnegar Owner: Solomon History: The sword in the Persian legend Amir Arsalan. The witch mother of a hideous horned demon called Fulad-zereh used a charm to make his body invulnerable to all weapons except this specific sword. Shamshir-e Zomorrodnegār originally belonged to King Solomon, and was carefully guarded by Fulad-zereh, not only because it was a valuable weapon, and indeed the only weapon that could harm the demon, but also because wearing it was a charm against magic. A wound inflicted by this sword could only be treated by a special potion made from a number of ingredients, including Fulad-zereh's brains. Effects:Anti Demonic slaying. Due to its purpose being made against demons. All creatures of the Dark and those that can be considered evil in nature suffer horrifying wounds from it. Anti Magic Resistance, was said to have been charmed to be resistant against magic. Cursed Wound, Said that the sword could leave curses that was incurable. Type: Passive Range: Close Quarter Combat/ Anti Personal Rank B Anti Personal Noble Phantasm Range 1 Targets 1 Claíomh Solais Owner: Nuada Airgetlám History: A legendary sword that was said to be the legacy of Lugh, who used it to slay Balor. The Sword of Light compelled the hero to preform three sets of tasks to prove the hero's worth. Used by Nuada and gained the fame of being a sword made to take on evil and save the good and the oppressed. the sword was used greatly by Nuada till his death at the hands of evil and then Lugh used the blade to slay Balor with it as a Sling against him. Effects: Holy Attribute Because it was used against Balor who could be considered evil and used for the sake of the people. It has Holy Attributes and used against evil, which it does increased damage on. Its secondary effect is its God Slaying Prowess in which the user uses it like a spear and throws it at its enemy or use it as a Glaive in which case, it does more damage in proportion to the divinity of the foe and cuts them down with ease. Type: Passive/Active Range Close combat to ten Meters when thrown. Rank; B, when using it in its first form. Rank A when using it in its God Slaying Mode. Targets: 1 Joyeuse Owner: Charemagne History: Joyeuse was forged with the Lance of Longinus inside its pommel. As a result it can be easily compared to the Holy Lance itself. Forged with the materials to made Roland's Durandal and Ogier's Curtana making it practically impossible to break the blade. Effect: In its typcial usage it can be considered to be a High tier Holy Blade. But when the a True User arrives and prove their worth to defend the people as not only as a warrior of God but also everyone regardless of their religion and proved to be use against Zealots. Its true power reveals a God Slaying feature within the sword. Type: Holy Passive, God Slaying Active Range: Close Quarters Target: 1 Rank: B (In its basic form). A (When activating God Slaying Prowess) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to admit That's a new and interesting approach and I'm curious about how this fic will go. I do have a question though, will gilgamesh appear in this fic? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shirou's body is made of blades. Well, Demonic Blades to be exact. I always ship Sella and Shirou XD I'm grad to see this scene. Now that he is revived by the Evil piece, what's next? Will Shirou accept supernatural as his new lifestyle now? BTW A toast to the author for trolling us, readers. Bravo. Well played asshole. |