Of course sona wouldn’t fall so easily, but it would be oh so satisfying for a punch to the face

Illya has a bro complex and shirou is denser than dense, a perfect formula

A sao kayaba reference and a combination of Sebastian and walter in the form of vincent,wow that’s op

Shirou’s getting better!

Im of the opinion Shirou will fuck Riser sooned rather than later.

So i just found this fic, and i got to say, im surprise, this is pretty good. Surprisingly good having in mind that its a crossover.

Very faithful to what Shirou's mentality could be in this situation, including on the fights i was really worried about then, and i still am, but i do have some stuff to give advice regarding some not very well know knowledge and some ignore.
I have read some reviews annoyed that Shirou still follows what Sona tells him, after certain plot points are throw around (whcih were very well set up), it makes sense when you think about why Shirou still is around and the trust he has in her even when they are at odds(which again maked perfect sense).

Now for all the good there is a bad, and that is the out of nowhere problems of Irisvell and not proper set up of the relations between the devils. Dont get me wrong revealing those relations as they are important, it makes sense. But it was imply that they werent nice and they wanted nothing to do with the devils early on, and the mess with Shirou was the only reason why the family, outside of Kiritsugu, was interacting with then... Yet suddenly Iris has good relations with then and has a Simp from one of the young important figures... It didnt had proper build up or mention. It feels like out of nowhere, the Iris still having problems also feel like out of nowhere. It just happens, and if this last one was tried to be foreshadow by Shirou being or had been a momma's boy, as a momma's boy i feel offended because your mom doesn't have to go through horrible stuff for you to be a mom's boy. It just happen you either click or for reason of spending more time with her then with your dad because he works long hours or travels a lot.

With that out of the way, what i wanted to add, for you to have in mind, now if you know all of this, sorry for wasting your time, if not please keep it in mind. First of all, the limits of Shirou's and Emiya's UBW, yes it cant COPY divine constructs, but it can create sword with the same powers and ability and physical form. That's what Emiya threaten Saber to do in UBW route, he was going to summon a sword that looks and can dl the same things that Excalibur can and the blast of those 2 clashing would have killed Shirou and Rin but not then(same can apply to EA). Now obviously because he is creating then, he doesn't get the past users skills... But he can still proyect then(This was all on an interview of Fate/materials which has a lot of info regarding FSN).
Next the card class, people tend to forget that this contains a fraction of the power of a servent which is a fraction of the power of a Heroic Spirit. This is important, because Shirou through the use card class can only reach the lowest of the lowest power ceiling that Emiya can reach, and explotion that blows up a cementary is not possible for this Shirou through caldabog 2, his peak is a grenade. Shirou on his own may have more chances of getting a Caldabog 2 blowing up a cementary level of power then with the class card by the time he reaches his prime... But thats the good thing of doing this character, because he doesnt need big explotions or destruction to win. He just needs his mind. But its important to have clear the limit of his destructive power, its not blowing up a cementary with Caldabog 2, its a grenade

Hope that it was a bit clear that im enjoying the story as a new reader and i just wanted to add a bit of my opinions and knowledge to keep it as good as its. Because you are doing a really good job.

I’m suprised neither sella or sona are asking about the change in shirou’s outfit and strength that night

Wholesome family

Honesly fou has gotta be the best Pet to have ever if I’m being serious

"excalibur fragments"

god I can imagine the entire church losing their collective minds and shitting themselves if Shirou somehow Projects the ACTUAL Excalibur.

which... can he do that? i think canon-wise, the Divine Construct is out of his reach, but not sure here.

Fou kun best pet ever to do that for your master gahh illya and fbi bro this story is on a whole another lvl

You got us in the first half not gonna lie

This chapter had a bunch of feels in it, and the Riser part was hilarious. I wonder if Ciel is around, it would be funny if the Phoenix Clan knew about a human with an immortality greater than theirs, also Ciel was apparently friends with Archer in life, which I find interesting.

Loved this chapter! Iri being the force she is has yet again stuck in the underworld! You’ve certainly set an interesting premise for the Riser Phenex arc and you’ve definitely started it off great! Also Shirou and Sonas argument was very well done, the build up, the perspectives, and their desires to help Rias all we’re factored in nicely. My favourite part of this chapter is when Shirou straight up said ‘no’ to Sona for not being able to help everyone, that was a very Shirou move and was great. I can’t wait to see: how this plays out, more Shirou and Rias interactions, more of Shirous snarky remarks, and how this next conversation with Riser goes!

yo solo deseo que tenga drama y discusiones entre la famila