hmm, personally i'm in an in-between on what I think of this so far, but it's still not bad and different so far so i'll give you that. although if you don't mind me asking, what are you going to do with ise in this version? and there's going to be a 4th season? oh how I hope that the guys over there learned their lesson and won't try to do what they did last season; that or not make rias be in the heroin spot light all the time instead of the original heroin.

its interesting chapter, but making shirou a devil? I think its a mistake, why he cannot be a human?

I'd love to see more!

about time the story got its remake.

Now if you look at the first chapter of Guardian of DxD and this chapter, you can see a lot of improvement, not just grammatical but also story wise.

Maybe its better that you remade it.

Why do i feel that Zelretch was the one who sent Shirou that card

ok... this seems rather different from your normal crossover for this two worlds

Like how you gave Ayako some screen time, she is barely touched in stories

Will Shirou be able to still hold Holy Swords. Because it wouldn't be Shirou if he couldn't.

The only part I didn't like was him being turned a Devil, because now he's got instant enemies from this.
Oh well, just hope your story doesn't disappoint me.

HHmmm devil kaleid Shirou with install powers... wonder where this will go

Is he going to join Rias? please say so since if the one who's going to resurrect Shirou is Rias since I don't want to expect and only be disappointed that your going to follow the clinch and overused route which I really hate and dislike

This is way better.

WAAAAAAAAAY better.

I hope the Archer install is going to be a big deal throughout the story.

If you keep up this level of writing you're looking at something special here.

This really is different for the other fanfic... i mean this time Shirou becomes a devil, and so he is kinda 'who ever revived him''s bitch
Hope its not Rias, she doesn't deserve Shirou.

sweet

so wait...

Is Shirou becoming Rias servant or Sona's?

so shirou can't project holy swords. that sucks

FINALLY! THE REMAKE!

AND IT LOOKS EVEN COOLER THAN THE ORIGINAL!