Fou is best wingman, confirmed.

Interesting characterization of Riser. The closest to this that I've read was in "Go Away I'm Watching Porn".

LA ESPERA VALIO LA PENA, UN GRAN CAPITULO

I really enjoyed this chapter. Despite it not having a lot of action. I think that Shirou getting a closer look into the creation of sacred gears is really interesting, I’d love to see him learn to do more with them. I’m wondering if he could make some pseudo sacred gear if he gets a chunk of one that broke off, like how part of Vali’s armor breaks off and Issei uses it.
By the way, I’ve thought of something, Shirou capsule definitely recreate what Issei did with his peeling technique. Shirou just needs to use structural grasp and reinforcement. We know that if you reinforce something too far it breaks, so if Shirou uses it just on the peel of something he could have it break away, perfectly peeling it. I hope you do that.
Anyway, please keep up the great work!
And stay healthy too!
Super happy to see an update! And it’s interesting that you had Riser win.

Okay you want constructive criticism maybe break up your chapters in the smaller tents like I really love the big chapters but it's really hard to keep my place especially when I'm waiting on my phone since it seems to go back up at random points Plus would be easier to stop if it was a good stopping point. Overall I like the chapter I'm interested in why he's having visions every time he analyzed the sacred gear. I'm also kind of wondering why answer to fix station on saving people if he doesn't have the same trauma as cannon Shirou since you said that based him on version from Prisma illya

the new chapter is quite good, the way you try too make riser more than just some villain is interesting so i wonder how the bride arc get solve.
the only problem i see is that shirou is getting OOC which i don't like, the way he talk back to akeno is really strange, more than when he don't realise what he say hurt her and when he somewhat understand her problem he doesn't apology to her.

thank god the story is still alive
the new chapter is quite good, the way you try too make riser

i'm glad the story (and it's author of course) is still alive!

i like that you're actually giving riser some depth. i actually have read some fics in which he isn't a douche the whole time.
i really liked that you actually give a bit of a backstory for why he does it and how he grew into it

what i liked less however was shirou constantly putting his foot in his mouth, while he's no social butterfly and can be pretty impulsive i think you're just overdoing at this point.

honestly i skipped through a few of his dialogues because of how cringe it was.

once in every few chapters is fine but when it happens so often i feel like it's happening nearly every one fourth of the time he talk to someone, it's kinda too much.

also the fact that he goes straight for the father thing when he snapped to akeno is well, pretty forced. if it was just her parents he called out as not raising her right it might've been a bit better, but going straight to "father" which is the crux of her issues is really overdoing it.

putting that aside, i do really love how you wrote shirou and ravel's mutual exasperation and tiredness to iri's and riser's antic's. it's just perfect in my opinion.

his meeting with Ddraig was also really cool.

I expected some Riser x Irisviel NTR, but instead, im the one that got NTR'd, Sadge, anyway, glad to see this story is still being worked on. Really like what you did with Riser characters, intresting to see Shirou NOT take part in the Rating game like all the other fanfics, very excited to see how its resolved next chapter!

Well first off, I appreciate how you’ve made Riser more than a 1 dimensional “villain.” Sure, he’s a douche, but even in canon his peerage seemed to like him well enough, so he must have done something right.

Also more romance flags for Shirou, from Tsubaki and oddly enough, maybe Ravel? Idk, second one’s maybe a stretch. Imo, best girl in this fic is still Rossweisse though, despite her only appearing for 2 chapters.

Wonder how you’re going to deal with the Phenex situation. Going the canon route is probably the easiest, but I can’t help but wonder if there’s some secret route where things work out amicably, maybe due to Irisviel’s influence. Either way, looking forward to seeing how this plays out,

This made my day! So long have I waited! Thank you! It was a good chapter with compelling arguments, suspenseful thoughts, and some good hearted laughs. I hope the next update to this epic tale is sooner but I do not rush art. Take care and we’ll done!

It good to see my favorite author has returned I was beginning to believe you abandoned this for good which would have left me upset for seeing a masterpiece left unfinished. Also I have a recommendation for the Excalibur arc in another fanfiction I read shirou was able to identify that the self proclaimed Excalibur were actually reforged shards of caliburn and heaven propagate this lie to ensure no one was the wiser and to solidify Christianity. After all if you hear the name Excalibur your first thought goes to a weapon forged by fae in the inner seas of the planet and the last Phantasm. Excalibur is a weapon that can't be broken like durandal if it does it stops being Excalibur and those who believe it are only fooling themselves. Excalibur in it sealed state is an antifortress while unsealed it has antiworld I highly doubt ophis or great red can withstand the might of Excalibur head on.

Hang in there Fou, if there's someone that can get Shirou laid is you

I rather like how you developed Tsubaki & Shirou's relationship. That slow burn kinda makes it feel more believable as it develops into a romance.

Actually I'm really hoping for Iri to find out about Tsubaki purely for the hilarity to follow :D

Pretty good good, really nice that to see someone humanize Riser. The only thing that I can criticize is update frequency, but I prefer quality over quantity any day, and so far you have been delivering