Finished. great story :)

J'adore

Wow, what a great job, what an amazing story. So warm, atmospheric, sweet, tender. How touching. Especially the last chapter, it's... amazing. It was so warm in my heart, I just enjoyed this warmth that your work caused. Interesting idea and wonderfully written.

Totally agree with your author note ella and Lucifer give me overprotective big Brother and over enthusiastic little sister energy

oh be still my beating heart... i loved this so much

This story was soooooooooooooooo good and soooooooooooooooo sweet! I loved it so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so soooooooooooooooooo much!

Beautiful moments with Trixie and Lucifer n Maze!

A sweet, fluffy ending. :)

Oh, I only wish Linda had been more straightforward at this point in the show's storyline! There is more Lucifer-reveal happening now than I think could be believably sustained, but there's still a deep satisfaction in watching him put the fear of Hell into people who need it.

I like how each person eventually accepts Lucifer in their own unique way. :)

I liked how Dan went through the same sequence of shock, fear, attempting to get Trixie away from Lucifer's side, and (though the path was a little different) finally acceptance. Really nice reason to reveal the wings to Dan—protecting Trixie when he tried to rush Lucifer to protect her. I also like how Dan started laughing because Lucifer had been mocking Dan for being covered in feathers, and then Dan realized that Lucifer was actually covered in *more* feathers than Dan had been. Clever! And a lot of fun.

This was unexpectedly beautiful. :-) 3

Amazing

Thanks for sharing your writing.

This was such a sweet story. Great job!