Reviews for Everything and Nothing |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really like the idea of the story. It also doesn't seem as grimdark as worm stories go. Which we are desperately in need of. Because the canon is already bad enough. But I do have one observation; I have no idea what clockblocker was on about the whole cat thing at the end... I don't think Schrödinger was mentioned anywhere? So I don't understand what is with the cat reference... |
![]() ![]() ![]() i laughed so much in ch 3 & 4 just so much i have the giggles i keep having to wipe my eyes |
![]() ![]() ![]() Taylor Hebert with Schrodinger's power...ooooh this could get really fucking twisted. I mean, given Schrodinger has shown the ability to manifest within someones conciousness, that could get Taylor slapped with a pretty hefty Master rating. So Stranger, Master, Mover...yep. Shit is going to get real, real fast. Loved your Assault and Battery scenes, they were golden. And the Clock/ Assault byplay was hysterical. It'd be piss-funny if Taylor returns to find a sheet over Assault...even when he isn't frozen. *Snerk* Hope to see more! Cheers SA |
![]() ![]() ![]() One of my favorite stories, and I think that you are doing a great job on it! Can't wait for me! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hilarious and beautiful, I can't wait to see where it goes! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hurray for humor! Can't wait to see more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Like a cat indeed! Interesting portrayal of Taylor in this one. And great antics between Assault and Clockblocker (why don't people do that more?)! I'm cheering for Taylor to join up just from that! It's gonna be interesting when they realize just what Taylor can get into with her power. Thanks for the fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is looking like a fun story and the tone so far is making this an enjoyable read. The interactions with the heroes should be interesting to see. Especially since all the heroes should be fairly welcoming, not counting Halbeard and Piggy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an excellent story. Glad to see a Taylor actually having a bit of fun... while causing endless paranoia, but she is Taylor :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh God. That was amazing. Haven't laughed that hard in a while. Thanks for writing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fun fact: this is the story that introduced me to Worm and made me want to read it. I'm excited to see it updated! I couldn't stop snickering reading the interaction between Assault and Clockblocker. I get the impression Assault is the only one who considered that Taylor would be monitoring them, probably from the instant they entered the building, given her demonstrated abilities and personality. I'd say this is a pretty clever ploy to show her that they're genuine and wipe any fears of interacting with Heroes from her mind. The ability to exist anywhere, even within others' minds and memories, so long as you can perceive yourself has so so so many applications and Taylor is gonna (ab)use the hell out of it. I wonder if her ability includes Shrodinger's inability to die so long as he could perceive himself. If so, she's about as difficult to kill as Gray Boy, maybe even more so: after all, the catboy really did get his head blown off and got better. Also, yeah I can see why explaining "I am everywhere and nowhere simultaneously" could be difficult. "Teleportation" riiiight. I can't wait to see how this progresses. Thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Taylor seems to be enjoying herself...Shes going to freak when she gets killed for the first time and yet is still alive. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this very much. I follow to see where you are going. |
![]() ![]() Assault and Clockblocker might act as class clowns at times, with Battery as Assault's reluctant comedy partner, but it's been taken a bit too far here. It just don't find it particularly funny They are not completely incapable of acting professionally. |