Reviews for The Yondaime's Assistant |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Danzo isn't the roots that keep the tree of Konoha alive, he's the parasite masquerading as roots so it can suck the life dry out of the tree's trunk. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa, I get the feeling that Maiko would be something of a proto-Danzo with a tenth of the evil and ten times the competence |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy nuts she ended up saving freaking Minato! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you. As part of my annual "read my favorite fanfics," I came to visit. I still love your story. |
![]() ![]() thank you very much ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hate Genma, and the way you railroading him for relationship. Annoying asshole sleazeball. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This doesn’t make sense. You’ve disregarded everything that makes naruto and built this shittier version with parts you like for a kakashi and genma threesome with none of the story requiring a m rating. Trash fic. Might have just said this is wish fulfillment |
![]() ![]() ![]() BEAUTIFUL |
![]() ![]() Wow love your fic! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow i read a different version a Naruto's temper tantrum on AO3 . i am sur Maiko didn't slap Naruto this ones different . Is the fic here edited ? |
![]() ![]() There’s no sex scenes? Then why rate it M? I’m a head out… |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was incredible. I had my hesitations about the "threesome" relationship but I read it anyway and now it's one of my favorite fanfictions. The heroine is smart, quick witted, confident and strong and just how I like. That is so rare. I don't know how many stories I had to quit just because of a spineless dumb or overly shy main character. I just wish the one-shots had been separate. I really liked the oneshot with Nanny but unfortunately there was no romance until the last moment lol. I would have loved to read more about their relationship. The 2nd oneshot , I mean 27th chapter was the only chapter I didn't like that much. I should have left it when I read that it ends open but I couldn't resist after the others were so good. There was quite a bit of angst and they didnt end up together. So no pairing with Minato *cry*. Nonetheless, you are an incredible writer and I'm about to dive into your other stories. Thank you so much for sharing them with us. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for the journey, I enjoyed it immensely. 3 |
![]() ![]() Damn! I envy Genma so much. A sexy, mature woman; a sexy but dangerous man- all for the sexy, bisexual man to keep and enjoy. I. Am. So. Jealous. |
![]() ![]() ![]() really wouldn't mind more AUs.! i love maiko and your story |