Reviews for This Mess We're In
shadow of reality chapter 12 . 4/5/2004
That little inuendo left me rolling with laughter and your pasionate scenes made me a little, lets use the word tingly... this is very good please update as soon as you are able. . .thank you
*giggle* "inuyasha's is pathetic at first, but grows really big. And Sesshoumaru’s brings people to life." *giggle*
ptbear chapter 12 . 4/4/2004
Great chapter. Update again soon.
Gabie chapter 11 . 4/1/2004
I love your story, and bro i'm waiting for you to update. It's killing me over here. This is probably the best story I've ever read, and trust me..I've read alot. Update soon pleaze! c-ya
Tatoosh chapter 12 . 4/1/2004
Yay you updated. Interesting chapter. I think I like how you are settling the relationships. Look forward to more.
jarjayes chapter 6 . 3/31/2004
this one took me awhile to read. I'm glad the cold shower actually helped me out and this one just cooled things out.
Random Floater chapter 12 . 3/30/2004
I feel so happy you posted on my birth day Now go post another chap for some other person on their birthday ne? HURRY
jarjayes chapter 4 . 3/30/2004
so far, it's very interesting, I had to peak at the after chapters to see if it gets even more interesting. I will not read any further for today since now I'm in need of some icy cold water.
Annoying Chaos chapter 12 . 3/30/2004
I love it! There's one more person on this planet that doesn't think Kikyou is bad! Oh happy day! Kalu! Kalei! I'm so glad that this story is continueing...I thought for a while you might have given up on it. Update soon...at least as soon as possible!
Arthemisa chapter 12 . 3/29/2004
Wow.. I mean, wow... I've read the NC-17 version and this one, and I have to say I like the NC-17 more ; some scenes were..very shocking of picturing, and I don't mean the lemon.(though it was really good ;) Its a shame that the Hayashi's had to die.. who would have thought, at the beginning I thought it was a dream or something, it just couldn't be.. but well, life is not fair. At least Kagome has sorted out her feelings towards Sesshoumaru.. maybe the fight will not end all happily like we are hinted in the present lines chapters but at least another chance has been given to Kagome.
. I think that encounter with Sesshoumaru and Souta will have some importance in the present line chapters uh ? ;P Keep writing, this is an incredible piece of wording. I really admire you, your originality and hardworking in this.. its really amazing.
Pixi Vixen chapter 12 . 3/28/2004
This is my absolute favorite fic! I have read it twice, you have such a great sense of humor and timing! Please update soon! I can't wait for Kag and Sess to get together in the present!
Tsuki Yume chapter 12 . 3/27/2004
It is so depressing that that happenned, but you did install a feeling of peace later and this chapter was very funny after that. I hope there won't be a lot of tragedy later on in the story, and I see it could be very long. Of course, you do have long chapters. It took more than an hour to read this one, and I'm a fast reader. Great chapter and update soon!
Ana chapter 12 . 3/27/2004
Hey! your story was great! Are you going to to continue? 'cause if you are I can't wait to find out what happens with Sesshoumaru and Kagome in the past and Sesshou and Kagome in the present. Please make the story longer.
Fuyu no Miko Sama chapter 12 . 3/26/2004
Holy crap! LMAO! That's hilarious!...oh god...*gasp* that was too funny...PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!
I absolutely LOVE your story! I can't wait for the next chappie! - Seriously, i'm gonna die...i have to read more!
Ja ne!
Anxiously awaiting,
~WhiteMiko
waternymph23 chapter 12 . 3/22/2004
This is one of the best stories out there! It's funny and romantic and has an incredible plot! Please update soon!
Blue Jeans chapter 12 . 3/21/2004
Amazing story! I love how you captured Aya and her family. They become so endearing to not just Kagome, but to the readers as well. It is also so great to see how well you kept Sesshoumaru in character and yet humanized him completely. So... maybe only Kagome can understand him - and Rin as well, though Jaken sure can tell when Sesshoumaru is pissed - but it's just great to see that the brother's rivalry is just that, no more and no less. Still... hehe... Inuyasha does have issues... though the sword comment went pretty good with that too! Hehehehehehehe... ;) - blue
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