I normally don't read twilight stories, but this one snagged my attention. I am intrigued how much further you make take this story, and how you intend for the Master of Death title to play into the Whitlock's lives, and how the others find out about it.

Also, good luck on your interview!

I loved this story it was a unique relationship and I would love to see the shape-shifting werewolves meet a "real" one.

The post snippets would be nice, lovely end btw the difirent perspectives were rather spot on I thought.

Very, very nice.
But I still argue the fact that there is no way that Bella should've fallen for Edward as quickly as she did. Teenagers are taught over and over that what they consider love, is usually just infatuation, and this is true. Yet, no one questioned Bella's choice to have a child as well as get married all right after high school.

I loved this so much, and I wish you all the luck in the world on the 16th.

I definitely want to see another sequel to this! I love this story and the one before. Maybe touch upon other children Jasper and Hariel may have, what Bella and Edward's future became, what happens if the remaining Volturi learns about James, whats happening in the wizarding world and how they would react with the knowledge that Hariel hasn't aged, or anything you're willing to write about. I'm sure most if not all your readers will be looking forward to an addition to this Jasper and Hariel series.

Amazing end for a fantastic two shot! I'm surprised but very pleased you added in a bit of the Cullen's and Bella at the end :) As well as a look at baby James! Soooo cute! Anyway I loved the ending but would very much be open to family's Whitlock snapshot stories.

uas i need moar of dem whitlocks yasssss

For the extra snapshots of Whitlock family life, yes please! Would love to see more, if they have more kids, and maybe what happens with the Cullens. And good luck with your interview!

this is great!

nice

Good luck!

I would definitely like to see snapshots of their little family together! It would be brilliant :) Thanks for this epicness.

I loved this latest update! I'm always looking for female Harry stories and your stories are my favorite even after I've read so many other ones.

Please do the sequel and the volturi scene where they tell A to Harry's status