Reviews for Trapped in a Broom-Closet
codywhite162 chapter 21 . 7/16
This is such a great story and I hope you come back to finish it someday!
Dragonstar125 chapter 21 . 7/6
is this story on hitas or will you continue it?
corjca1 chapter 2 . 6/28
arsehole pedo fuckers nonses rapist fucks
lydie chapter 21 . 6/23
Great story, wish you could finish it!
Jemma Blackwell chapter 21 . 5/21
very scary at this juncture, please give haste to Harry.
izukusonjackson chapter 21 . 5/3
Please update! This is really good!
Guest chapter 11 . 4/15
Is he the “Dork” Lord, or is he a scary, powerful foe that is about to enter Harry’s mind? Really, “dork lord” in the same sentence that is supposed to imply a terrifying possibility…
There’s not a single instance of “dork” lord used in your story that makes sentence for what’s going on at the time.
Guest chapter 9 . 4/15
You used “dork lord” even in the narration. Is Voldemort a laughable, unscary annoyance in the store, or someone so feared that Daphne is terrified to tell Harry he’s going to be a father due to the very slim possibility that the knowledge could pass through the heavily shielded link they have?

Every time I see the “dork lord,” it’s a weird out of story I’ll placed snark that doesn’t fit the tone you appear to being trying to create with the rest of your story. All you have to do is go back through and change every “o” to an “a.”
Guest chapter 6 . 4/15
“Little merry band” and “dork lord” are pretty lame insults that don’t seem likely to come from children who are so terrified of a wizard that they can’t say his name out loud.
Also, since you used “gryffindork,” “dork lord” seems especially unoriginal for clever Slytherins.
WildOnionTops chapter 21 . 4/15
Loved re-reading this. Hopefully the muse will strike for a update,
Specky Clarke chapter 21 . 4/9
Great story, Please finish it.
scarletqueen100521 chapter 21 . 3/23
hope you come back to this love the plot
kazz274 chapter 21 . 3/15
This was such a good read.
Thank you
Guest chapter 21 . 3/8
More please
Fluffy McNutters chapter 21 . 2/25
I love this story
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