At various times in this and the previous chapter Harry is referred to as Heir and/or Lord Potter. Wouldn't Dumbles have been notified of Harry's change in status and his own loss of legal authority over Harry at least now that the will has revealed he never had any legal claim to guardianship

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This is just badly written, and it feels like 80% is just filler.

Vernon ‘kills’ Harry and then we never hear of it again. not a good start ‘Colt’

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Harry Potter and the boy saved by a bird and then nothing was ever a challenge again. That's the name of this story right?

This chapter left a sour taste in my mouth

For fuck's sake, write something new, you fucktard. Are you too lazy, or too fucking stupid?

Do you only have one story that you've written but for some reason need to make into two different stories? Seriously, learn to write something new, rather than just reusing the same stuff.

I realy prefer HP FF where There is some recognition of what A contract is , The clear evidence of frawd and/or criminal tampering offered a clear oportunity,
By far my favorite is the He has to compete?. He has to be 17 ? ok, see on this date in a few years

Harry's argument would be stronger with more emphasis on the lethal effects of "freeing' house elves.
As for muggles not having "family magic" the problem is HG's lack of muggle education Harry wouldn't have to argue if her primary school just covered genes and a bit of modern application of Darwin

A couple things always bugged me about this part ( Cannon or Fan fic ) is 1- I like that you increased the prize from 1 to 5 thousand Galleons and most important 2- Is that why are the " Emergency Squad " outside the maze and not stationed at the most dangerous spots and at the cup ? While i understand that in Cannon there was no ES to rescue the champions the teachers were the ones outside the maze ? What do you think

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honestly i like the god-like harry. i would of loved a part 2 of this.

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