Reviews for Harry Potter and the Lightning Lord
InfinityMask chapter 6 . 11/29/2016
Ohh? I surprised that Harry didn't come to Greengrass to talk about the contract... and more surprised that Daphne didn't know about the contract... I would think his father would tell her about it...
ithrow chapter 5 . 11/27/2016
Wow, this is a great read. I love how you portrayed Harry and Dumbledore. I can't wait to see what you write next.
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 5 . 11/27/2016
Interesting story here so far! I look forward to reading more!
anarion87 chapter 5 . 11/27/2016
nice so far
The Dark Dragen chapter 5 . 11/27/2016
not bad, but would love nothing more but to have longer chapters...
The Dark Dragen chapter 3 . 11/27/2016
Not bad, could do with more details to explain what happened over the last few years, otherswise a good read.
mangekyocthulhu chapter 5 . 11/27/2016
This story is great, can't wait for moar!
InfinityMask chapter 5 . 11/26/2016
Thx for the update.. I curious, did Greengrass know/remember about contract? Did the house elf the one that take Potter property from Dumbledor? How Dumbledor get the item? Did he steal money too? I hope you make Harry a good friend with Nevile..
Guest chapter 5 . 11/26/2016
You need to separate large blocks of text into paragraphs.. That whole part of dumbledores reflection waa ridiculously long
0DINS0N chapter 5 . 11/26/2016
Great so far, but would it be possible to make the chapters longer?
magitech chapter 5 . 11/26/2016
If Potter castle is unplottable having Harry receive his Hogwarts letter there would seem to be a ridiculously easy way to defeat such wards, just send an owl with a tracking charm.
Have Dumbles panic a bit when the owl returns unable to find Harry or have Harry receive the letter on a trip outside the castle.
Guest chapter 5 . 11/26/2016
Very interesting ..please update soon
ChazTaylor chapter 5 . 11/26/2016
keep going
Minase 2928 chapter 5 . 11/26/2016
love the chapter keep up the good work.
Guest chapter 5 . 11/26/2016
Outstanding update
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