Reviews for Harry Potter and the Lightning Lord |
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moaning-myrtl3 chapter 32 . 6/13 I quite enjoyed how you took care of Luna’s bullies. |
moaning-myrtl3 chapter 28 . 6/13 I still dont understand how Harry comes from Hadrian. Shouldn’t it be Haddy instead? I dont mean to be critical and I understand that there’s only a handful of longer names where Harry could be considered a person’s nickname but Hadrian? Really? |
ruth hammond chapter 43 . 6/13 Interesting change with the attack on the Mer people! I like the way that you switch parts of the cannon that have been over used and came up with something else the change the boredom factor, good work! |
ironhair chapter 34 . 6/13 Good AN Ignore the trolls |
ruth hammond chapter 41 . 6/13 {Lost my keyboard...buried under junk that I"m trying to go through and save some and dump lots more.} I do love your ANs...they are fun and informative, they also give insight into you as the author...that is important because it helps understand the story! Poor Harry and Daphne. I realize that it is late in the story development, but maybe they need to get married now and not wait. They would be able to sleep together [stress relief], they would have an apartment together [more stress relief], they would not have as many people bugging them for social events [dances], Daphne would have better handle of Harries mental stress. [A thought] |
moaning-myrtl3 chapter 18 . 6/12 Damn. This story turned dark as fuck very quickly. There’s quite a difference between “mature and sexual scenes” and “sexual assault and rape scenes. As an author, you never know who is reading your stories and may be triggered by a past experience. An authors note would’ve been handy in the beginning of this chapter. |
moaning-myrtl3 chapter 13 . 6/12 I find it odd that you would write that other people couldn’t see the Thestrals especially since a vast majority of the school saw Harry kill a troll in front of them. Also, why would Neville be able to see them? His parents were never killed by the Avada curse; they were tortured with the Cruciatus curse. |
ruth hammond chapter 34 . 6/11 Let me start with the statement the I am a retired AP[Advanced Placement} writing teacher and I love your writings I wish that I had had you in my class to counter the dunder head you have "reviewing" your stories. Reminds me of some I had in my classes and thought they were geniuses...BAH! If you can figure out how to mark him as spam and just the idiot instead of trying to get an ulcer. It will never learn or stop as long as you keep trying respond to it. Hope my spelling, grammar and writing is correct, my eyesiight is not doing well tonight. I happen to enjoy your writing and know that there are others who also enjoy...keep up the good writing. THANK YOU! |
ironhair chapter 28 . 6/11 I never understand why people leave negative, name calling reviews. Horrible. Your story is a nice read, ty :) |
ironhair chapter 20 . 6/10 Good explanation for the animagus transformation :) |
ironhair chapter 9 . 6/10 Good A/N Thanks |
ironhair chapter 5 . 6/10 The last part was rushed. Could have changed the animagus learning reason from "he decided..." to, his linked thunderbird being a cause for an easier transformation. Same with the marital arts and memories bit. |
ironhair chapter 1 . 6/10 Reading |
ruth hammond chapter 27 . 6/10 I think that I could do with out the cave scene, it gives me a stomach ache...gross...but then there are people who would complain if it were not there...you are forgiven. [HEHEHE] Love the love scenes, they are not over done, just enough st get the point across. |
Guest chapter 39 . 6/9 There is no contract (check any 1st year law book for definition and why is Amelia not arresting Albus ? |