That's the thing with god-like stories. It's like when the D&D campaign hits high lvl , combat becomes a waffle stomp so you focus more on role play and world effect story cuz after a while even the terasque becomes monotonous.

I want to point out something most people forget - the war was already in full swing when Lily, Snape, and the Marauders were in school. Why would James not try to make the junior Death Eaters' lives worse? Especially if he thought Snape might be a bad influence on Lily.

Not saying it was the right way to go about things, but it puts the "Sirius tried to indirectly kill Snape" thing in perspective too.

Excellent story. Well written and certainly engaged the reader. Thanks for your talent and effort.

you need to make up your mind up about wether haeey is the heir or lord

I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!

I thought of a great idea for your next story, Harry becomes the master of death, he travels the world learning all kinds of magic, until he is the ultimate sorcerer. Then after learn everything both magical and non-magical, Death takes Harry to an earth in another dimension, where he is friends with Lucifer and Lilith, is an uncle to their daughter Charlie, and goes back and forth between the Hazbin Hotel adventures and the Helluva Boss adventures. With Harry playing apart in both shows, the endings could be different then in the shows.

I hope that you will watch Hazbin Hotel and Helluva Boss, cause these shows are in the same universe, so you can go back and forth as Harry travels throughout hell in this Harry Potter crossover story. This idea came to me cause of what would happen now that Harry is the master of death? Since Harry is now the master of death, that must mean that Harry has some connects to Heaven and Hell, so putting Harry in this crossover makes perfect since.

I hope you love my idea and will make it real, PLEASE! Keep up the great work and always believe in yourself and in the magic in your heart!

Maybe romance is not for me, but the start of the ship is cringe-worthy.

An extremely inconsistent story… It features a rather bizarre attempt at a ‘grey Harry’ in which he’s a bigot but is against bigotry who spews half-baked (at best) rants which go against things he himself has said earlier in the story.

The syntactical mistakes are numerous and severe. Adding that to the poor characterisation has resulted in this being the first fan story I’ve committed to reading where I haven’t made it to the end. I always try to — and have previously always managed to — read the whole thing before forming an opinion. With this story, I was over half way through and had to concede I’d been battling for many chapters and could no longer continue.

If you, like me, find yourself interested in the basic conceit of this tale then be warned that you may struggle to see the payoff (assuming it comes).

This leaves so much to think about. I look at our country and what is happening and wonder, so much evil and our officials are either ignoring it or pushing it, , if it works out as I fear it might, I hope we are prepared.

Cheers. Ty

Anyone else trying to figure out/questioning if snakes have penises? No? Just me? Cause like how the heck is the snake going to f*ck Umbitch?

I often think there are some things wrong with the constitution, such as cruel and unusual punishment, but then some idiot would go too far and with the wrong punishment for the wrong crime and all Hell would break loose. But then we have got to find a way to get the point across, CHILD ABUSE IS NOT RIGHT! It's bad enough with adults but an adult better able to deal with it, or at least they have a better chance to survive...oh, come on, any and all abuse/torture is wrong and may be should just make it a Capital crime with one year to get your appeals in and then carry out the punishment. BTW, Thank you for bringing this to the fore, too many people think that it is out of fiction books and not real...baloney.

I quite enjoyed how you took care of Luna’s bullies.

I still dont understand how Harry comes from Hadrian. Shouldn’t it be Haddy instead? I dont mean to be critical and I understand that there’s only a handful of longer names where Harry could be considered a person’s nickname but Hadrian? Really?

Interesting change with the attack on the Mer people! I like the way that you switch parts of the cannon that have been over used and came up with something else the change the boredom factor, good work!

Good AN

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