Reviews for Things Left Unsaid
wordswithwind chapter 1 . 11/25/2016
The ending to this is absolutely perfect! Loved it. :) Just a small suggestion - I think it would be really cool if you added Newt's POV too, so you could switch back and forth between the two POVs. I think that would be cool. ;) Also, you have a few run-on sentences so you may want to correct those, but no biggie.
PhoebeSmilee chapter 1 . 11/25/2016
Awwww you conveyed her feelings so well! It's so true to the scene! Good job XD Write more please! Maybe Newt's POV?