Reviews for The Law |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome first chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would have added Luna Lovegood but I assume she's with a Wizard that will be appropriate. Should be a interesting Post Book story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love! I love this type of fic so if you know some recommend it or one where it appears cyssa. I hope you will return soon with the next chapter. Kisses |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting twist on the marriage law thing good start |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice start. Though you have an OC which are generally not that interesting, but you have selected Narcissa and Hermione so that's great. Both my fav for their age groups. Tonks could have been another good addition depending on her living status. Keep writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah...you should correct the part where Shacklebolt calls the girl his NEPHEW. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome start, can't wait for the next chapter :) Amazing work, as always... Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting. I look forward to how garbage guts and the fan girl react. The white weasel should be fun too. Looking forward to the next part. |