Reviews for The Law
Penny is wise chapter 1 . 11/26/2016
Awesome first chapter.
dennisud chapter 1 . 11/26/2016
I would have added Luna Lovegood but I assume she's with a Wizard that will be appropriate. Should be a interesting Post Book story.
Xyori Nadeshiko chapter 1 . 11/26/2016
I love! I love this type of fic so if you know some recommend it or one where it appears cyssa. I hope you will return soon with the next chapter. Kisses
Ronin Kenshin chapter 1 . 11/26/2016
interesting twist on the marriage law thing good start
alec-potter chapter 1 . 11/26/2016
Nice start. Though you have an OC which are generally not that interesting, but you have selected Narcissa and Hermione so that's great. Both my fav for their age groups. Tonks could have been another good addition depending on her living status.
Keep writing.
SeerKing chapter 1 . 11/26/2016
Yeah...you should correct the part where Shacklebolt calls the girl his NEPHEW.
satene chapter 1 . 11/26/2016
Awesome start, can't wait for the next chapter :) Amazing work, as always... Thank you!
Wombaat chapter 1 . 11/26/2016
Very interesting. I look forward to how garbage guts and the fan girl react. The white weasel should be fun too.

Looking forward to the next part.
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