|Reviews for World Falling Down|
| Selenity84 chapter 17 . 3/24/2019
Loved this story! I always hated how Belle treated Rumple, like it was always all his fault instead of hers.
| Tamara Menninger chapter 1 . 7/13/2018
Hello Dearie two of my friends Ash & Jean turned me on to this story. I have read the first three chapters & love your insight into Rumple & what went wrong with Rumbelle in Season 4. I totally get your understanding of Season 4 as I have been writing a fan fiction for 3 plus years now that explores what Rumple went through after the events in Going Home & what happens to the Underworld the first time (another thing the writers forgot) & my version of Belle is the woman who does fight for Rumple even at the point of wanting to kill Zelena herself (more than once). So keep up the good work with this story. I like the character of Kat she is every fangirls' dream of the love Rumple deserves (I hope to do this with Belle of course).
| FionaMo chapter 17 . 6/25/2018
I just reread World Falling Down. Superb.
I hope one day you might find the time to produce a sequel! I'd love to see the battle between Neal and his older sister...
| ShatteredSoul37 chapter 17 . 5/10/2017
I enjoyed reading this every second I got even if you dont make a sequel its pretty safe to assume that everything turns out alright
| Mari Wollsch chapter 17 . 1/25/2017
super great xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
| Grace5231973 chapter 17 . 1/9/2017
Thank you both for writing it! I am sorry its over but I enjoyed every minute. I am sorry Emma can't be saved though even though I haven't been happy with her for a long time. I am happy to see everyone else finding their happiness!
| Rumple's Dearie chapter 17 . 1/8/2017
wonderful story and awesome as hell ending! I so wanted to see a trial and was not disappointed with the results. This time there was no "fake" redemption and "mercy"-just straight up justice for dark deeds committed and straight up punishment that fit the crime! Well done, dearies, well done!
And the kids are brilliant! I loved Papa Rumple and Kat there at the end! If Kat can't have any more kids could they adopt one? I have a feeling there are more children who need them out there.
And please write a sequel eventually! This verse begs for one!
| MrGoldfan chapter 17 . 1/8/2017
Loved this story! Especially the trial-and unlike some reviewers, I disagree that you were too harsh with Hook and Regina. They were dispicible people and got exactly what they deserved, and unless Emma repents, then she'll share their fate. I mean they basically bred and want to unleash the Devil upon the world-so the most merciful thing they ought to have gotten is death, IMO. I hope that Damien is sent screaming to the boughs of hell in whatever sequel you two write.
It was great to see the children as they grew and I'm glad Belle had a son with Erik-it seems fitting his name is Michael too-not just for the singer/actor, but also for the archangel. By the way, I hate the fact they have a son on the show-it's way too redundant and the whole plotline is two sandwiches shy of a picnic. I also hope in this verse the asshole Dark Fairy is NOT related to Rumple in ANY way.
I also love an overprotective Papa Bear Rumple! Made me laugh outloud!
I hope to see more in this verse in the future! Until then, dearies!
Oh and BTW, YOU two ought to be the producers of the show-then it wouldn't be a craptastic shithole mess!
| killerkougar1 chapter 17 . 1/7/2017
I love how well put together this story was, i especially love how you changed the pairing for rumple and i liked the twist for belle's pairing. I look forward to seeing both more from this timeline and more stories in general from you both, excellent work.
| Lady Sabine of Macayhill chapter 17 . 1/7/2017
Loved the chapter. It's good to see Regina and Lilian get exactly what they deserve.
| ninewood chapter 17 . 1/7/2017
Yeah, Robert/Rumple. leave the kids alone! :)
| Supremus85 chapter 17 . 1/7/2017
I liked this story, all in all, still I think Hook and Regina were judged too harshly.
| Shards of Frozen Fractals chapter 17 . 1/7/2017
Beautiful! Will you be continuing the story? Or will you leave the future unwritten for now? Love all the parallels, and very intrigued by the children's characters too. Thanks for sharing this amazing story!
| Pingulegs chapter 16 . 1/5/2017
Are you going to show Regina any more or is she gone for good? I like someone else's idea of a trial and conviction in the afterlife. It would be great if Bar could witness it...
| phantom's love chapter 16 . 12/29/2016
that was beautiful, thank you.