this IDIOT doesn't think giving out Information is gonna bite her in the ass someday? well I'd like to see the look on her face when the enemy tries to kill them after finding out that killing the master makes the servant disappear.

The moment you pulled the Holy Grail War crap onto the Dxd world your fic was done.

Isn't kinda stupid to be giving out information about you and your sibling? Almost all fics I read when meeting the Devils etc they just give out information casually like its a fucking cabbage growing on the side of the road.

Hmm

You idiot! Haha TRASH fanfic!

Trash

Tomiya... Tohsaka Emiya... To miya , I just realized it now

...why are you needing them?, they are obviously stronger, are you saying tgat some random girl is challenging saber? I call BS

way to go to fucked up your own story mate

the story have so many potential AT character devel at all,and you just make my mind jumble by reading this and that's why i can see you only get 122 fav despite good for parody this is seriously fuck up mate the character are to should read gentle phantasml beast,Representative of humanity or holding all the class card for reference to stories like this.

Honestly your story is one of the best
Versions I've read...sad this happened.

Una lástima que dejes esta genial historia aún entiendo . Aunque si vas a hacer otra versión de tu historia creo que seria mejor se centrará en una línea de tiempo donde shirou ganó la guerra del grial y luego él mismo fuera el fundador de chaldea con Rin , Luvia , Sakura y illya como sus esposas así ritsuka/gadou , Godako , mashu y Olga sean sus hijos con cada una de ellas . Y luego de los sucesos de f/go la familia emiya y algunos servant's ( el harén de shirou ) hallan llegado al universo de DxD donde iniciarán sus aventuras como miembros de la nueva facción de héroes . Y en ese procesó al llegar al universo de DxD shirou y su familia se hallan vuelto demi-servant y los hijos de shirou serían como demi-dioses
*Shirou/ghilgamesh-caster/archer
*Rin/ishtar-archer
*Sakura/parvati-lancer
*Illya/Artemisa-archer
*Luvia/quetzalcuatud-rider
Y resto del harén de shirou :
*Arturia/lancer
*Medusa/rider
*Scathash/assessin
*Medea/caster
*yorimitsu/berserker
*musashi/saber
*Nobunaga/archer
Bueno esa es sólo mí opinión personal espero que no te aya molestado .

OK there may be a lot of characters but your story Is very good and exciting. In fact I just thought just recently when will it update. So yeah a bit upset the story has been abandoned but it's OK. Also if you were to make a remake, make it to something as great as this one.

I liked the chapter!

Wow the twins have a disturbing back story . Lol a competent child of Shinji. Arg Shirou abandoning his children n family.