Reviews for Price of Blood
Draconic chapter 19 . 5/25
I don’t really know how to feel about this. That was extremely anticlimactic. You had over 50,000 words of Sophia digging her own grave and in the end, she didn’t survive long enough to be force-fed the truth until she couldn’t blind herself to it anymore, but also that she was chum in the water for Taylor’s power.

It was admittedly amusing that Dragon abused her capacity as an AI to assassinate Sophia while making everyone think that the suit killed her by defaulting to defending its user, but even so, it seemed like a waste.
Draconic chapter 13 . 5/23
Ahh, sweet comprehension.

Time for her to REALLY start self-destructing.
Draconic chapter 11 . 5/23
Sophia is dying a death by a thousand cuts and still can't see past her edgelord mentality even as the truth slaps her in the face with a rainbow-coloured canoe paddle. Coil's not even trying here. He must be laughing his ass off at her. Truly making Sophia suffer is it's own reward. I can't wait to see how she reacts when she can't hide from the truth anymore.
Daemon Sadi chapter 19 . 4/22
Another lovely story.
Thanks for sharing :)
scyfly chapter 12 . 1/31
coil sends a message from his mobile while at his base to a burner of his minion then why does he need to erase cell logs at the prt?
scyfly chapter 11 . 1/31
yeah no, tattletale would take one look at sophia and know she thinks she works for the prt and ferret out calvert in no time and connect him to coil. there is no possible way she'd miss that
scyfly chapter 11 . 1/31
hell even i think the birdcage is way to extreme for sophia. its not like she is an escape threat with a simple shock bracelet
scyfly chapter 10 . 1/31
when the goverment says we knows who is responsible but you gotta sign an NDA first you just know its because they want to cover themself, so why the hell would anyone say yes to that, without a word of protest or doubr?
scyfly chapter 10 . 1/31
what carol just did is child abandonment.

you are forcing your narrative way to hard
scyfly chapter 9 . 1/31
why would coil even use his landline in his prt office? though with parahuman bs i would faraday the prt building and redirect it through a celltower gapping the faraday. this way you control and monitor which calls get in and out. but that still makes it better to use a burner and spoof that logbook. erasing calvert office or burner... thats a no brainer
scyfly chapter 9 . 1/31
spoofed the gps from a landline?
scyfly chapter 5 . 1/31
children arent even allowed to sign anything without their parents.

civil rights are being violated left and right here, and that is when they are playing nice
scyfly chapter 4 . 1/31
its a shame no one ever blames piggot and armsmaster.

one is an autist with zero social skills yet somehow in charge of the ward and the other put him in charge of said wards incl a probationary criminal. for that matter thriump is guilty in not seeing it either, its not like sophia did her best to better her behavior. oh and sophias case worker too.

all these ppl cary guild through negligence and prob incompetence as well.
Corwyn chapter 19 . 1/11
Excellent story! Thank you for sharing it with us.
ReviewerPops chapter 19 . 11/29/2023
Damming Dragon got a little savage there.
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