Great

has been a while since you publish this fic but just now that I love it . Vader was just perfect !

Sweet chapter! And you're introducing Leia! That's awesome!

Naaah, it's not bad at all. It's just a movie. For me there was also that moment he came out of the fog like he was at the fashion week. But yeah, the hallway scene, as gruesome as it may have been, really gave off a sense of power and confidence, which I suppose are usually considered attractive (read : I found it 'alluring' too and now I'm trying to find excuses). This was one of your best chapters so far. The whole torture thing was, of course, graphic, but this chapter and the past one were really tense and thrilling and I enjoyed reading them. And I cannot help but wonder if you plan on developing Pamila's relationship with the twins in the future. Anyway, great job!

Oh noooo... Vader, buddy, that's a terrible idea. You'll need these guys later so maybe keep them around and sway them to your cause now that they've seen you can work together? Or play the victim and get a few of them to sympathize? I don't know, do something. Seize the opportunity. Great story though! Hope Pamila will be okay.

Ha! No I don't think it's insensitive :) I'm glad you find the story gripping :) Just something I whipped up between college classes :) Thank you for commenting :) gets me more motivated to get off Netflix and write the sequel ;)

Is it insensitive of me to say I don't feel sorry for the guy Vader just tortured? Because I don't. Just leave Pamila alone! And Palpatine truly is despicable, but that is nothing new, is it? Anyway, this is just my way of saying that your fanfic is gripping.

Oh my god Ackbar was hilarious... Good job!

Your story is adorable so far

NOOOOOOOOOO!

I literally just thought about this story Wednesday morning, curious about what would happen and hoping you would update. Then, tada!, an update. I should play the lotto, haha.

Definitely eagerly anticipating the sequel. She is in a terrible spot. She loves him for how well he had treated her and I assume also because of Padme's love for him, yet he is still a killer, and now violent and possessive to her just like he was with Padme. And he is so far gone to evil and darkness that I don't think he could pull himself out of it alone if he even wanted to. I don't think he even truly sees how far gone he is, despite acknowledging that he's a monster and she deserves better. If he did, he wouldn't have made the same mistake he made with her as Padme (violence). It's so sad, really.

Cannot wait to see what happens next.

Oh... My... GOD! The ending KILLED ME x_x x_x x_x. I loved the chapter and can't wait for the sequel!

I love It. I can't wait for you to continue. I really hope you decide to bring Luke and Leia into the story soon. You are doing a great job so far!

Holy shit does that mean Vader's going to propose next chapter?!