|Reviews for Under the Mountain|
| a pearson chapter 7 . 12/4/2017
most of this story is great but sadly it turned bullshit last minute
| Rocky Shackleton chapter 3 . 6/13/2017
I hope you don't Dragon the story to long. I like 'em short and sweet.
| ivanganev1992 chapter 7 . 4/11/2017
Ch 7 . And what is the nameand where is the sequel ?
| ivanganev1992 chapter 9 . 4/11/2017
I WILL TRY EVEN FOR CHARA TO HAVE A LIFE .
AND EVERYONE , GLICH DR. GASTER ,
(ASRIEL)FLOWEY . CHARA'S SOUL DARKENED IN HATE . BUT MAYBE JUST TO FOCUS THAT HATE TO THE INJUSTICE THAT HATE WOULD BE USEFUL.
IF WANTS TO RETURN ALL 6 THAN A VOLUNTEER TO REPLACE AND LIFE SUPPORT WHILE THE OTHER 6 SOULS BECOME BACK TO LIFE . BUT FOR SAFETY MAYBE THE WEAKER MODEL ONE BY ONE IN POUSES
TO REST AND HEAL UNTIL IS ONLY THE ORIGINAL SOUL AND THE VOLUNTEER TO SAVE ASRIEL and instead to die to ... live in other body ?
Than improve the past present and parallel universes.
| ivanganev1992 chapter 8 . 4/11/2017
Ch 8 That we the untraditional ending (almost) but have me idea . EROR Glich DR. GASTER And Asriel to have bodies . Ok First is Chara to be feeling living creature again . Than the INSPIRATION AND THAN HOPEFULLY ALL . UNLESS IS SUJJESTED TIME TRAVEL . AND EVEN FOR THAT HOPEFUL ENDING ITHER WITH TIME TRAVEL OR WITH ... ASRIEL TO RETURN THE HEARTHSSOULS BACK TO LIVE FOR ONE VOLUNTEER OR OTHER FEW TO SACRIFICE TO LIVE AGAIN . AND SEE WHERE WILL CONTINUE. SANS
I CANNOT PROMISE THAT I WOULD NOT RESET BUT IT WILL BE WHERE IS NO OTHER OPTION AND IMPROVE THE FUTURE EVEN FURTHER AND HOPEFULLY IMPROVE OTHER ENDINGS TOO .
| Husebad chapter 9 . 3/8/2017
That was awesome I love it. Hey how about in the sequel Hiccup plants those seeds and one somehow becomes Flowey? Or he makes an alliance with a kingdom of monsters or something along those lines?
| Anonymous chapter 9 . 2/20/2017
This was an AMAZING story, it's not easy finding crossovers.
| Guest chapter 9 . 2/17/2017
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/17/2017
lol the little song hints. XD
| Multiple-Characters1-Acct chapter 9 . 12/27/2016
Can the monsters get dragon's?
| buterflypuss chapter 9 . 12/14/2016
| buterflypuss chapter 7 . 12/9/2016
| Reba G chapter 6 . 12/7/2016
For a moment...my soul broke... *insert Asgore voice here* at least they're back together right?
I wonder how they'll react to Asgore. Would he remind them of a certain chief? Waiting for the final battle fills me with determination
| buterflypuss chapter 6 . 12/7/2016
| buterflypuss chapter 5 . 12/7/2016