Reviews for Feeling electric
Guest chapter 1 . 4/17/2017
I agree with the other guest on the "retarded" part. Even though people in my country have no care about how they use the word. You painted Newt in a way I didn't expect at the ending but I liked it still. Write another one this was good
Angie chapter 1 . 12/20/2016
En vista de que hablas español, te dejo mi review en nuestro idioma n. n me ha encantado tu historia, aunque deberías rescribirla en español. Aqui tienes ya a una lectora. Saludos y espero la continues in Spanish jeje
willworkforramen chapter 1 . 12/10/2016
How sweet of Tina to throw a party for his return!
I can imagine how much they can't wait to jump each others' bones the minute he returns. It must have been agonizing to wait throughout the entire party! :P
I love the way you describe how it feels for them to be reunited as husband and wife. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 12/1/2016
Hi there!

Very enjoyable! My only suggestion would be, at the very beginning, to replace the term "Socially retarded" with something like "socially unaware" or "socially inept" as retarded is word that can be very offensive to those with mental disabilities