Reviews for Primordial in a World of Gods |
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![]() ![]() Im back again. Update this shit |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dont know if this is getting continued but its pretty good |
![]() ![]() Pls add more chapters |
![]() ![]() Uma historia muito boa ,gostaria de ler uma continuaĆ§Ć£ pela historia . Gostei muito de sua engenhosidade . |
![]() ![]() ![]() good |
![]() ![]() ![]() when the next chapter comin? |
![]() ![]() ![]() cringe |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly, more and more, Naruto's group is proving a disappointment. He may be the strongest on Earth, but his team is about the weakest, too many D-listers, not enough power. Also meant to mention how utterly ridiculous it was a few chapters back when you had Capt. America hurt Superman, at all. Unless they gave his shield a Kryptonite coating or something. Too bad a good premise ended up so lackluster. Also, your summary doesn't seem to match up at all, as we hear/see nothing of Naruto fighting against Gods. And if he was sealed for A Millenia, he'd have been awake during Apocalypse' life, as he was 5k years-old, which is 5 millenia. |
![]() ![]() ![]() the idea has promise, but his group is kinda lacking in the impressive. a couple guys who use guns? Eh. The UN just jumping on board with a US controlled super group to happily push aside the JL? Eh. And honestly, way too much detail on various mid-level at best fights. Lex, Kingpin, Joker, the big guys, that's all fine. But the long descriptions of taking out Black Mask and the deadlight group, eh. Getting bogged down in minutia can kill a fic fast. Though that may've happened as the fic hasn't been updated in a long time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so basically, everyone but Naruto's group is morons? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update pls |
![]() ![]() Please continue this it so good |
![]() ![]() Where is the update at BFFR |
![]() ![]() ![]() What the fuck. You made a dc/marvel/naruto fanfic? You know why no one makes ones this big? Because the lore gets fucked up and no one can accurately power scale. It's a relatively decent fic. Certainly not the worst that I've found. It's just a mess. |
![]() ![]() where is the update |