Reviews for Primordial in a World of Gods |
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![]() ![]() ![]() huh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() odd pacing. a few ooc moments but for an unlikely universe merge... this has been an interesting read. I've quite enjoyed the story so far. keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() super |
![]() ![]() ![]() ️️wouldn't it be cool if Naruto gave the new akatsuki that he created the Bloodlines, power and skill of the previous akatsuki.️️ |
![]() ![]() I enjoyed the story it’s amazing please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() im crying, this is beautiful u have a gift pleqse dont hide it from the world and update with all your heart |
![]() ![]() ![]() Algún día actualizaras esta bella historia? |
![]() ![]() Probably my favorite one of your stories hope you continue it soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue this story . Its been great so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an amazing chapter and believe me I do not use that word often. Red Hood's speech was perfect and it was nice getting to see so many different perspectives/reactions to it from villains, heroes, govt, etc. Great job. |
![]() ![]() where is the update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start but, there is no g in yin (I think, I may be wrong on this) but other wise well done |
![]() ![]() More chapters please |
![]() ![]() You should update this soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like where this is going. And on a different note, the robin in teen titans was tim drake all along. The TV show (the good one, not the idiotic slapstick chibi knockoff will never count) should probably be ignored when it comes to which robin was on the team |