Reviews for A Fishcake Guardian |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have read this story and its pretty good, as I have never seen something like this if I have to be honest, so keep it up cause i really like this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh this is going to be good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Was that Yu Yevon and Jecht’s soul that escaped right at the end? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update, update, update |
![]() ![]() ![]() We have been waiting too long please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looking forward to Chapter 16. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The original thing Yunalesca destroyed was just Sin's armor. The same armor it creates every time. If the final Aeon was destroyed then any future Sin should be far weaker. Otherwise you're invalidating the need for a Guardian to sacrifice themselves. I feel like you've written yourself into a corner. Unless perhaps Seymour gets involved. I'm still not happy Naruto just seemingly forgot to deal with him. Not cool bro. Lastly, the lack of solid romance kills me. I want to see genuine progress with Lulu. Honestly, with what you've written, Naruto's relationship with Yuna feels more like a sibling bond. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmm. As much as I loved this story, in reflection, that fight could've gone a bit better. No one explained anything to Naruto. They understand how foreign he is, and the way you describe what he felt from Kihmari's attack... I don't know. Just feels like they owe Naruto an apology, not the other way around. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yagami keep your promise update this story already instead of son of war or fairy tail watch pirate sentai or soundless knight |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() is this story ever gonna get an update |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait to you update the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's a shame that it was never completed, and to tell the truth. This crossover is the most simple to write, when it comes to FFX, it has the most straightforward story plot. It was a great story, while it lasted and do really hope that one day that you will finish it. Hell, if possible I would love to see how you would do your own version of FFX-2. |
![]() ![]() ![]() U need to update this so good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope this gets updated soon! Thanks for the work author! |