Hey good work with explaining the situation between Miroku's parents. Your theory sounds plausible. I love the whole fate's thread thing. I hope that they'll get to Kagome's time in time.

actually, i prefer long chapters since they would have my undivided attention for the longest time and wont have me be as frustrasted near the end... _; so keep up the same great work!

lol! that little scene in hell got me confused, but its all fine now... really interesting story for that explanation though! D

Whew! This is fantastic. I love that you even did some digging into Miroku's past in this fic. It really hasn't been explored much in the manga, all things considered. (And it seems no one ever stops to wonder about his mother.) This chapter was probably the most fascinating read thus far for me.

And I don't mind the long chapters at all-the longer the better, in fact. The only problem is that they do take longer than more normal-length chapters to write. But like I said before, in a fic like this, that's just fine.

If only the wait wasn't so nerve-wracking! Especially now that Fuujin and Raijin's plans are really starting to affect Inuyasha-and the others. I'm dying to know what will happen, but I'm almost afraid to find out! Anyway, keep it up. _

Keep it up and faster

Oh my Gosh! This was SO good! When is Sesshoumaru going to meet up with Inuyasha? Is he going to be there when Inuyasha gets attacked by Fujin and Raijin? Are the group going to find out what's wrong with Inuyasha? Heheheh...is Inuyasha going to be able to use his powers? I mean he has to have SOME powers at least, right? Anyways, please continue and update the next chapter as soon as spossible! Please write quickly! Try to get the next chpater up within two weeks! Normally, I would request for it in one week, but then I would be asking for too much, wouldn't I? PLEASE WRITE QUICKLY! I really want to find out what happens next! Especially to Inuyasha!

I rather like the long chapters..because I hate suspense! I like to read everything at once!

This chapter was beautifully written without going out of character like what tends to happen in romance chapters. I wonder exactly what that powder was, and what is being planned for Inuyasha...

Keep it up

Now, now, wasn't that kit village one little pot o' betrayal?

I LOVE your story. It's wonderful. There's so much background to it, whether from just the fic or actual history/folklore itself. It's inspiring, to meet such a talented author.

I can't wait for more.

Thanx!

Wow, Celadon Serpent-san! You are an amazing author! I love the way you make references towards other folklore and such. The story of Kaguya-hime and of how involved Inu Yasha is to the story is an interesting twist. So in your view Inu Yasha is a little ove 400 years old? Would that make Sessho-maru 600 maybe? What would Sessho-maru's connection with Kaguya-hime be? Might she remember him as well? Continue, onegai!

Ja ne, Celadon Serpent-san!

Do you, by any chance, know what "-maru" means? I've seen it used but I have yet to find what it means. Arigato! Ja.

Oh, how ironic!

This week, I was terribly sick with this cold/flu thing (I actually think it was both . . . ), and I honestly had nothing better to do, or could do, than read fanfiction! I was checking out the "favorite stories" list of an author that I find quite talented, and this was the only story on it!

So I read the 4 chapters you had on there, and then all of your others as well . . . ; I loved them all!

And today, I check out the Inuyasha section (still sneezing and coughing, mind you), AND THERE IT WAS AGAIN! *huggles celadonserpent* Thank you for updating when you did, your timing was PERFECT!

I wuv this story, it makes me feel all fuzzy inside.

Wow, I had completely forgotten abou that fortune game. Thank you for reminding me and writing another wonderful chapter. Polite Inuyasha is so cute and the scene at the dinner table was hilarious. I like how her mom is really trying to encourage their relationship. I also like the way you compared Inuyasha's chess strategy with his life. Always protecting his queen and risking his own safety.

Well that sux, she had to be executed to become a god? *shivers* Everything makes so much sense in this story. I love it!

Man, you should be getting a whole lot more reviews. *shakes head* silly readers.

Great writing style. You got me hooked with the whole "God's gift" thing. Very interesting. I'll go read more now