|Reviews for A God's Game|
| NightRain2 chapter 6 . 5/11/2003
I don't want the evil plan to work. Sigh, I suppose Inu yasha will need rescuing then?
| NightRain2 chapter 5 . 5/11/2003
I love the myths you sprinkle in here. Nice chapter. _
| NightRain2 chapter 4 . 5/11/2003
I love sneaky friends, having been one myself way too often. hehe This was an ice interlude, with more on Inu yasha's Mother. _ Nicely written!
| Hikaru chapter 7 . 5/11/2003
This is really good! I've already read Chri's Settle the Score, but I still say this story's better! And I don't really like it that they made Kaguya the enemy in the second OVA either. Anyways, PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE QUICKLLY! And what happened to Inuyasha? I didn't quiter get that part...PLEASE dont tell me thatFujiin actually suceeded! And damn that stupid Houshi in Kagome's time! He's a freakin' damn idiot! Um...dont mind my language, but I'm just REALLY angry at the stupid guy that attacked Inuyasha! Please post the next chapter within a week! I dont really care if it's good or not, I just want to know what's going to happen next, and I'm going to end up reading it on anyways, but sned it to me on the e-mail please! I can help edit if you want! Just Please post the next chapter within a week! Usually it would be 3 days, but you seem to want it perfect...oh yea, one more thing, I'M A GIRL. dont get that mixed up. I knw that Hikaru can be a namee for a girl or write some more quickly!
| NightRain2 chapter 3 . 5/11/2003
Cool, I figured Eri would catch Kagome in the series, but so far everyone beleives her grandfather. _ I like the way you defeated the shadow. Neat idea!
| NightRain2 chapter 2 . 5/11/2003
Cool, Inu yasha told them more of the story! _
I am really enjoying this. YOu are doing a great job!
| NightRain2 chapter 1 . 5/11/2003
I like this a lot. YOur mythology/Inuyasha's past seemed really nice. Vivid. I like the difference between the two stories also. _
| Spectrum chapter 7 . 5/11/2003
Geez, things keep getting more and more mysterious-now even Kagome's family has a secret past! The deeper and deeper the story goes, the more I wonder where you're going to go with it next, and just how you're going to pull it all off! I'm in awe here!
Well, obviously the plot really stands out in this chapter (and the cliffhanger! Argh! P), but almost even more, I really, really love the grasp of the characters that you have. It's really a pleasure to read. Inuyasha's brief conversation with Eri was great, and very revealing about the difficult choice he has to make between Kagome and Kikyou. And I also really liked the way you had Miroku briefly reflect upon the differences between him and Myouga. Also, I gotta thank you for keeping Inuyasha's character as young as he seems he should be-I must confess I got a little worried at the beginning of this story, when Kaguya-hime mentioned it had been several hundred years since she'd parted with Inuyasha. I just can't picture our favorite hanyou being any older than middle-to-late teens. But anyway, it's all good now. _
Except for that cliffhanger! Ack! O_O Well, hopefully you won't leave us hanging for too long. _
| Chibi-Bex chapter 6 . 4/29/2003
*whimper* you mean inu baby's gonna die! oh! but what about his mom! and if inu baby does die then won't he go to heaven (or hell...heh) as a soal? then whats-his-name will take his body or somin? what about kagome? and that other guy...you know k-somthing-or-other thinking kagome to be part of this future thing. and the the relationship thing's and inu yashas past! when will they find out inu's mom is a god! and THEN we've got seshy coming into the plot! yay! what's he gonna say to inu! and is inu going to live again? (if he dies that is...heh) i can't wait! and yes i like them in long chapters. cause it give me more to read! update! work thos hands on that key board! i wanna know whats gonna happen! will inu yasha be reincarnated or somin? tel mme!
i wanna know! *bawling eyes out* i wish people could write faster! *sob* cause i don't blame you! *sniff* i wanna give you super powers! powers to make to extra fast! so you could write more!
okey! i'm alright know! kinda scaring my self there -_-' getting a little emotional...just a liddle-bit! SO! keep writing! i'll review all the new chaps! your a really good writer and this is on my fav story list right about...now!
Chow for now! Bex!
| Chibi-Bex chapter 5 . 4/28/2003
col! i really like this story! so if inu yasha's moms a god then wouldn't that make inu yasha half god or somin? keep writing!
| Dexter2 chapter 2 . 4/23/2003
Hey, I haven't read the whole thing yet, but I am saving it to my computer so that I can finish at my leisure. If it stays as promising as it looks, I would be happy to put a reference to it in my own story. I thank you for your reviews of my story, and am glad that you enjoy it. Once I finish reading yours, I will submit a more formal review. Until later, this is
| Alta-Lemur chapter 6 . 4/18/2003
Hello celadon. Your story is Great! I do wish you would write more, but don't rush your chapters if you think that will lower the quality. Also, I do think your chapters are a little long, and they take me a while to read, but they are usually worth it. I like reading things as much together as I can, so I don't forget what happened only a bit earlier, so I like the long chapters. It shows that you are putting a lot of effort into your writing, and that you care for the quality of your work. It shows too. I do wish I knew more japanese words though, so I could understand your work more. I also wish I knew more about japanese culture. Your notes at the end of each chapter helps a lot. Write more!
| Calophi chapter 6 . 4/17/2003
This is awesome! When is Inuyasha's mother going to show herself to him? I wonder how he'll react.
| Chri chapter 6 . 4/16/2003
I found the idea of Miroku's parents great. Having them kill each other was a really original idea. I found Sango was a bit too fast with trying to kill Mai, but beside that the everything was written really good; especially how you got Mai believable.
I liked the part where Miroku found his family memory being desecrated. Really funny :) Shippou imitating his father was a really good idea, even if it didn't work.
I also liked your incorporation of Japanese history (-Nobunaga), and that it wasn't all funny back then. Here's a link I found during my own research :
It's from an art page (?), but they have some really good articles about religion, history and personalities. Look around a bit, I guess some of the art stuff might also interest you.
Your integration of Japanese history and legends is very interesting, I think you could have even incorporated this into the fic more (Kagome having heard of that legend and being awed that it is actually about Miroku's father)
Finally, keep your chapters long. If you look at other stories, almost all really good fics have long chapters. Short chapters suck, I like long ones much better; even if the wait is longer naturally.
Although your idea to cut your latest chapter in two was the right choice in my opinion, it would really have become too long. I like chapter between 5.0-10.0 words, and a bit longer doesn't hurt. :)
| Hakusan chapter 6 . 4/14/2003
I like the longer chapters in particular but if you need to shorten them to make more updates that's fine too. Keep up the good work I enjoy reading this story and I would like to see what happens next.