Destruction my man, pursuing his passions looking for a new purpose.

Wonder if this will come back at some point…Naruto is still in other Worlds and hasn’t resolved things with Talia and Barbara yet. Not to mention the existing Morgan & Mordred threat. But it’s been a few years, so we’ll see if there’s ever an eventual return.

truthfully this chapter was a huge one with a lot of info dumping and exposition, making it extremely tedious and difficult to read. i’m not familiar enough with the other medias incorporated into your fanfic outside of naruto and some batman but the whole endless and kingdom hearts influence is so strong that it makes the overall feel lose some substance in my opinion. it is interesting to read but there’s just so much jam packed that it’s like a dish with too much seasoning.

lloyd’s rep sheet makes him just sound like the average goon so vanitas’s struggle against him feels forced

they canNOT being calling each other sisters if they literally boink TT like maybe the romance isn’t there but they definitely are in a relationship with each other that isn’t just based on naruto

i think this chapter really marks the heavy kingdom hearts influence with the dreaming which as a reader i don’t like but tolerate. i don’t even remember if naruto’s powers even ever get explained which i believe is a plot hole.

i’m rereading for the first time in yrs TT i know i’m supposed to withhold my sense of disbelief but CPR breaks rips

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Plus it will go well with naruto unpredictable personality. They said that he can’t impregnate poison ivy so then he said fuck you I can do it and accomplished that feat. Making people shocked enough that their jaws dropped to the floor

I know you poison Ivy be barren. But since Naruto is a sage and has void/null power. Couldn’t he use that null power to nullify the poison and make it possible for her to get pregnant again and use the nature energy to make his sperm super fertile that poison Ivy will have no choice (really she would have a choice since she the one asking for it) but to become pregnant?

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His eyes are blue not hazel?

Putting Anakin's reaction from How it should have ended is gold. And I hope you write more chapters soon.

Love the story