Reviews for A Nobody |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please please please continue to his. It's rare we get a good Naruto and Batman crossover. Especially one that doesn't make him OP from the beginning. |
![]() ![]() Great job really love the detail of the psychology parts |
![]() ![]() One of the best stories I have read here, can't wait for more chapters :) thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice to see Naruto and Pam take their relationship to the next level. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story love see what happens in the future |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely incredible story so far! REALLY hope that you continue this at some point, as it has been nearly a year since you last updated it! |
![]() ![]() Please update. |
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![]() ![]() You've removed everything that made him Naruto. Just use an OC instead. But then again, you wouldn't have gotten this many like's, favs and reviews had you done so, so we'll done in getting the diehard fans of Naruto to like your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hate to nitpick but... It feels like everyone here reads and that's a little... And of course I dislike that always just wants to help. Selfishness? At this point it kinda feels unrealistic. And of course SHOW DON'T TELL! Or am I tripping. I don't want to you to tell me that guy going for the kill or he shot his foot and feels pain tell me he held his knife aloft or he jumped out in sharp squeal, clutching his foot or something. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great and interesting story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gotham if Naruto is living there is a dangerous city but the problem is Batman himself due to his obsessive paranoia. |
![]() ![]() I enjoy your stories. One thing I have to nitpick is that since I use my iPhones text to speak to listen to your story, the double speech that Ivy was doing just sounded like someone was writhing out the alphabet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice |