Loved it!

Great story.

Moronic

Oh I see he gave them to her, still straight up fuxking stupid

Mistress of death? So Luna stole his cloak and he has never noticed its gone? That is some straight up moronic horseshit.

Zero character growth, Harry is just as fucking pathetic as when this story started

Whiny pathetic little bitch loser Harry is not entertaining to read about

This MC is a whiny pathetic loser bitch

I still dont really understand whats happening. I just wish i had more details or context about Harry’s relation to everyone and who he likes. Maybe a little background setup in the beginning to start things off.

old gay fucker dumbles puff

I really loved this idea with a school in the U.S.A!And saving all those elves, people and weres is genius!

Wow, great beginnings!

Well it was a fun story. Interesting concepts, though I'll admit that your writing style and the military jargon was more than a little confusing at times. It's like not all the ideas and context in your head made it into the story, so I felt like I was missing something.

Also why planes? Maybe I missed it somewhere, but other than for military purposes, why would magicals use air transport that takes hours compared to portkeys (which it seems they all wore anyway as emergency backup)? I don't understand why they bothered with the C21s at all instead of just portkeying them over. Comfort I guess?

The fuck you write? Damn, I fucking love this.

I think I started this, or at least chapter one, and never got farther.
The fast-paced nature, while being left to infer certain details, is not what I'm used to, but surprisingly, I'm actually enjoying it this time around.