Ok..

Not too sure what I think of this story.

Premise great, 'colourful' language at first amusing then overused "the fuck you say"

Technobabble at times too much, with the military jargon definitions and unscrambled acronyms at the start of the fic would've been fantastic.

I will continue reading as it is a somewhat unique story, hope the dust settles rather quickly after dumblefuck's funeral.

Wonder if Viceroy of magic has any decent percs in either world, or just a ton of werk and a fancy title.

I immensely liked most of this story while the rest was still entertaining. Thank you for your efforts. I particularly like the premise of Magic using Harry as her avatar that gave him extraordinary abilities.

I would rate this mature and, in my personal view, at least 87/100 due to the use of graphic descriptions related to sexual exploits. Then again others may be drawn to such.

Keep up the great work and never allow anyone to stop you from writing what you feel needs to be written. I hope to read more of your stories soon.

Interesting reading this now that Charles is King.

I don't know if that Teddy Ruxpin is the creepiest bear in the world. My niece used her little brothers' to play a very heavy metal band tape many years ago now. Teddy didn't survive the experience.

This one read kinda of like Harem War and you should have had Harry get some Hinds 24 for close support it is the Russian attack helicopter it can transport 8 troops as well it nickname is the flying tank

Brilliant story

It was a little difficult to read at times, with the way you shifted from character to character in the same paragraph and also with the addition of characters like Death (even though using her from the Neil Gaimen universe was definitely different), but it was a very entertaining story.

I might just check out your other stories soon…

Definitely an odd ceremony/ritual…

OMG! You actually brought in Death from the Neil Gaimen stories? WOW!

Nice… A Pinky and the Brain reference…

Love the use of Rupert’s name here…

Not poisonous that’s if you Injest the toxin the sword is Venomous

XD I'm not real familiar with military things (though I do find it interesting) so when you said they were going to In and Out, at first, I thought you meant In'N'Out (like the fast food Burger joint they have in the U.S.A.). Lol.

I love this story this is the 6th time I read it. Just after your star wars story that was just as good looking forward to more.