Reviews for The XXXX You Say
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 6 . 12/8/2021
Bringing up what happened to Cousin Diana because of the Paparazzi. It left her boys without their mother. They refuse to accept boundaries. Quite frankly they deserve severe punishment when their actions cost people their lives.
Eriktheviking70 chapter 13 . 12/3/2021
A cracking good story, well written and entertaining. I hope one day to see what happens next.
Kai chapter 2 . 12/3/2021
Harry's food preferences make me shudder. Too many cows, too few pigs, and eating everything raw is disgusting. I grew up in a butcher's shop, so perhaps I'm a bit paranoid about salmonellae. They would have been career-ending after all. So thoroughly heating my meat, but especially eggs, is paramount. Dripping, rare, and runny sounds gross.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/14/2021
Loved it beginning to end. My only complaint is I wish it was 500,000 words longer at minimum! Would love to see more HP an if ever you decide on a all MCU or HP/MCU. Keep writing!
EdTheBeast chapter 13 . 9/8/2021
An excellent story! Luna as Mistress of Death,and of course Harry as Husband and Master of Death and Magic!
uberwald chapter 12 . 8/28/2021
This story starts out fine, but then rapidly descend into a twisted male power fantasy. Don’t waste your time,
hunzbookwyrm chapter 13 . 8/3/2021
Great story from beginning to end just loved it!
Lucifer-Satani chapter 1 . 6/24/2021
Out of curiosity is English your second language?
It's just that some of what I read didn't make sense abd there were some mistakes that would not usually be made by a native speaker.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/20/2021
Just put in desperate bisexual or lesbo or gay acts and multiple too and kill all the feelings. Because anything beyond single wife or husband is simple lust. Which reflects in stories, no emotions at all, simple lust without feelings.
Margaret Luna Sullivan chapter 13 . 6/2/2021
This whole fic has been hilarious and brilliant. Thanks for sharing it.
badicadaniela88 chapter 1 . 5/29/2021
I thought his name was Roger not Dan
Kai chapter 8 . 5/29/2021
"No quarter will be given." Or in the words of another monarch almost a century earlier: "Pardon wird nicht gegeben! Gefangene werden nicht gemacht!" "No quarter will be given! Prisoners will not be taken!" (Hun speech, Emperor Wilhelm II. to His marines on embarkation for China, 27th July 1900)
PotterRathboneGreyFan chapter 1 . 5/27/2021
This makes absolutely no sense at all.
kessu91 chapter 1 . 3/31/2021
I like how you wrote the guilt trip for the MUGGLEBORN BFF of Harry, the man who all are hunting, to go back to Hogwarts under the pretense of GREATER GOOD. I mean its not like shes going to literally be the number one target everyone will go after to get to Harry or anything like that so it makes sense shes the only one who can copy the book... So which chapter we will have the potion regime and rape attempts I wonder? But hey its all for the GREATER GOOD right? All the while MC trades one set of shackles to other while still remaining as the little bitch of everyone and their mothers since its only natural a teenager is the only solution the entire government can come up with...
Blazeb79 chapter 13 . 3/29/2021
I always love re reading this story. So good
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