Reviews for Elven Slave
Andmetwen chapter 15 . 5/31/2003
yeah, i almost did too...

so, there going to rivendell, right? oh dear... that would be bad for legolas wouldn't it? oh well, me likes angst... or at least suspense...

please update!
Tari Evenstar chapter 15 . 5/29/2003
I loved this story! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! Keep up the good work
Celeblas chapter 15 . 5/29/2003
*smiles brightly* *runs around* *pounce hugs Nosila* *turns into fox* *curls up on Nosila's computer and falls asleep* -~

Ele.
AA Battery chapter 15 . 5/28/2003
Thanks for getting it moving! NO i understand about the traveling a long way. Excellent plan! I hope something goes wrong with it so Legolas is stuck in prisoner for a long time... my, I'm evil. Oh well, evil is good sometimes!

-AA Battery
notahobbit chapter 15 . 5/28/2003
This is very interesting, and I have an idea for your, uh, problem. Galadriel and Celeborn could have married to try to end the strife between the two elf races, a feat which in the end did not work out and the war continued. But just because they're still at war doesn't mean it couldn't have been a failed attempt at peace and Arwen could have grown up with Galadriel and so it would have been suitable for her to marry Elrond, right? I don't know, it's just an idea you can work with.
Nessa Ar-Fieneil chapter 15 . 5/28/2003
Though Tolkien didn't give the age when elfves reach majority, my D&D manual puts it at about 100, but the live span is about 700 years. Where as Middle Earth Elves are immortal so I'd guess 10 years.
tenshiamanda chapter 15 . 5/28/2003
Yay Gandalf! Now for the Elladan, Elrohir thing. You've made a huge AU so far, so why not take it a step further? Elrond could have married anyone. And if you plan on slash (please!) ever heard of mpreg? In my slash story I had Gil-galad and Elrond as the twins parents, you could always go with Elrond/Glorfindel or somtething. If you don't wanna do slash just put another woman as their mother. thats all I can think of.
Sha'Lane chapter 15 . 5/28/2003
ONce more another greatly written chapter! PLease update more soon This will be runnin thru my head over and over again until you do!
Leila Eracktor chapter 15 . 5/28/2003
Legolas needs to come up with a better idea. There's tons that can go wrong with this one.

Love the chapter, though.
Nina chapter 15 . 5/28/2003
I hope they can bring Peace for all elves and legolas may find his father there also.
Ellen the Trickstar chapter 15 . 5/28/2003
hm...yes, elladan and elrohir are fun people, aren't they. i'd luv to see em make an appearance too. as for that problem, well, yes, galadriel and celeborn are on opposite sides, but hey, that never stopped romeo and juliet, did it? lol except, if u go with this, don't make em die! lol well, i hope that inspires you. keep up the great work, and good luck with the twinS!
SperryDee chapter 15 . 5/27/2003
Dun da da, SperryDee to the rescue! Celeborn and Galadriel fell in love and got married anyway, (like Romeo and Juliet, but without the double suicide). People were too scared of Galadriel to bug her and Celeborn about it. Like the idea?

Good chapter! And I'm short, too. Well, by my family's standards, anyway.(I'm 5'4" and growing like a weed, while my family on both sides are at least 5'7")

Please update soon!

-SperryDee
Faerfaen chapter 15 . 5/27/2003
O he's a brave elf... maybe Galadriel and Celeborn married before the war? then Celebrian could be in the picture along with Elrohir and Elladan..well its only a idea O)

*~* Dy *~*
NoName2014 chapter 15 . 5/27/2003
Hello! 'Tis me again. Another great (if short _) chapter.

As far as Elladan and Elrohir...I don't know if this would work, but maybe they could be Elros' sons and chose immortality so were sent to live with Uncle Elrond...'course, that would make them much older than they are in the books and I don't know if they would have been given that choice since Elros chose mortality, but it's already AU so...

Just a friendly suggestion. I'd like to see them show up, too. Keep up the good work!
Erhothwen chapter 15 . 5/27/2003
Thwen: Excellent chapter! Can't wait for them to reach Imladris!

*sniffle*

No twinsies?

I'VE GOT AN IDEA!

Legolas: Oh no, not another of Erhothwen's "brilliant" ideas.

Thwen: Shut up, "Leggy". *laughs hysterically*

Legolas: Shut up! It's not my fault my fan girls had to think of a nickname for me and unfortunately, you can't really make a nickname out of 'Legolas'.

Thwen: Anyway, what if the four of them travled foreward in time, knocked Elladan and Elrohir unconcious, brought them back in time, and TA-DA! Two twin sweethearts!

Legolas: Don't say I didn't warn you...

Thwen: Hey! It could work!

Update soon,

Lady Thwen
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