Reviews for close your eyes & swallow the sun
InsanityIsClarity chapter 1 . 4/18/2017
Great story! The feels felt it
FanladyGreen2012 chapter 1 . 3/29/2017
Dude. How dare you write such a beautiful story and make me feel my own feels.
achillius chapter 1 . 3/25/2017
this was amazing and made me tear up. i love the interaction between zuko and toph here.
YellowPaint chapter 1 . 1/7/2017
shit bro. ah, that was good. it has a nice tone, you nailed the character voices. makes my heart ache
Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2016
That Fantasy Junkie 96 chapter 1 . 12/21/2016
Wonderful, truly. You do Zuko, Iroh, and Azula such justice.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/18/2016
That was beautiful, punctuation errors aside. Was that due to you trying to keep the word count down?
ManofManyHats chapter 1 . 12/11/2016
I love how I didn't even read who wrote this before I read it, and then just like three lines in I'm like, 'yup, it's you'. You've got your own iconic style and it's just amazing. But oh, the zuko feels are back, and back with a vengeance.
Rosie-Lun chapter 1 . 12/9/2016
I wasn't sure about reading this, but now I know I almost commit a mistake (and it was the mention of Toph and Iroh what changed my mind about ignoring this amazing fic). I agree, Toph is great character and deserves be written more often. I loved her participation in your story, the "extended version" of that scene in the theater is what I needed (? (Seriously, it make me soooo happy, thank you).

And Iroh... We don't deserve Iroh c'x He's just... incredible. (Yeah, Zuko you couldn't find the greatest father in Ozai, but you did have Iroh, that's way better).

And of course Zuko! You captured so well the way his mind works *-*

I had a lot of things to say about this fic, but English isn't my first language (excuse my very bad grammar or vocabulary xs), so...

Amazing job! Keep writting.
Xenophemera chapter 1 . 12/9/2016
This was a great read. I enjoyed it.
waterlit chapter 1 . 12/9/2016
I almost didn't give this piece a chance because I saw that it was entirely written in lower case - but since you wrote it, I read the first line, and then the second, and then the third, and so on.

So. I liked how started and ended the fic on a similar note - with Azula and the scars she gave Zuko. I also liked how you showed the nuances of Zuko's life and character via his scars - it's an interesting take on his experiences and the fire he had to go through.

Great job!