Reviews for there will always be more
Emrys315 chapter 17 . 5/3/2020
Knowing English aint your first language prolly means you should find a beta. But besides that you kinda made them ooc. Predicting how each character would act to each situation helps the flow and visual. Anyway not trying to flame just trying to be helpful.
soniabell chapter 1 . 1/29/2018
I did not read your biography prior to starting this fiction. Just a few sentences in I realized English is not your first language, I tried to follow along and kinda got most of it. It's good, you should really try and get a beta to fix the errors and then it would be great. Good luck.
gotye chapter 16 . 10/15/2017
Holy heck! I've been waiting to read this story but, I could barely make it through the first chapter...I skipped a head thinking the grammar would improve but...wow you need a beta something fierce. I can't read even one more chapter. The concept is good, your grammar is awful and it's hard to read.
Guest chapter 44 . 10/8/2017
Love this story so much! Could not get enough of it.
dethwatch chapter 44 . 10/8/2017
So sad it ended but it was so perfect no ending could have been better loved it
Str1der2015 chapter 43 . 10/1/2017
Sweet
Str1der2015 chapter 40 . 9/10/2017
Lovely chapter. Like time jump
Str1der2015 chapter 36 . 8/13/2017
Loved this...favorite chapter!
junebugsparkles chapter 1 . 7/16/2017
Can't wait to see where you take this story
Str1der2015 chapter 32 . 7/16/2017
Yay! Been waiting patiently...
sillymommy2010 chapter 30 . 7/2/2017
YAY MARRIED! Now just waiting on those babies
Str1der2015 chapter 30 . 7/2/2017
Such great long chapters...thank you
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Str1der2015 chapter 29 . 6/25/2017
So sweet...
Str1der2015 chapter 26 . 6/4/2017
Aww baby twin didons...awesome!
Str1der2015 chapter 20 . 4/23/2017
Loved it..
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