|Reviews for It is only a matter of time now|
| MK3A2 chapter 1 . 9/24/2004
wow. Good. You convey the thoughts well, it's descriptive yet to the point.
Very well done.
| JellyfishGreen chapter 1 . 2/5/2004
Kickass is right. Good style. One of those days to save the last bullet for yourself, eh?
| Jord chapter 1 . 10/24/2003
| ISC chapter 1 . 6/19/2003
| Kieran chapter 1 . 3/22/2003
That was awesome!
| Just Scott chapter 1 . 3/18/2003
That can't be it! You have to write more...please. Do a chapter from the other volunteers perspectives or something. Come on!
| Jordan Matti chapter 1 . 2/11/2003
Cool. I'm curious, though: are the short, chopped-off sentences and lack of contractions (cannot vs. can't) part of your plan? It makes an interesting impression.
If I had written this, I would probably have used more contractions, because when I think, I think in contractions. But hey, it works for the story you wrote. And you make some very good points that are plausible as thoughts couched within the mind of a man about to die, although I daresay that things like eating hardly remind me of truth. They remind me of all the little pleasures I take for granted.
Kick-ass ending line, too.
| Mbwun chapter 1 . 2/10/2003
I really like this. Appropriately creepy, and you get into the guy's head pretty well. And I love the last line.