I'm so happy I read this storyline.
Very different from other authors I've read.
It was very dramatic and the Speakers so mysterious.
I LOVE Theo and Blaise, they are my favorite Slytherins next to Draco.
I don't usually like sequels but I'm anxious to read the next book.
Thx for peaking my interest.
Onward I go.
Take care and be safe!

I've read so few of your stories so I decided to try one at random that peaked my interest.
I'm pleasantly surprised of your choices for central characters in this storyline.
It's very rare to have a story with Harry, Theo and Blaise. I'm rather enjoying myself thus far.
Onward I read.
Take care and be safe!

I rarely post a review until I finish the story, but I am enjoying this too much not to say something. You have a serious gift with writing people and their motivations and feelings - you truly bring them to life. And Tarquirius? I love him! Most OC’s send me flying for the skip button, but you have created a treasure. Thank you for sharing.

"I don't want that, because I wish to be your first guardian!"
Oh my... It gets me every time.
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Hello, it's been a while.
I'm rereading one of your fanfics.
I hope covid-19 didn't get to you too bad these last couple of years.
I know you probably won't see this, but I just wanted to let you know that I think you are an extremely creative author, and that if you ever create an actual book, book, then let us know. I would love to support you and read your novel.

Thank you for entertaining us with your creative mind,
Anon.

Lots of Harry Potter stories have an issue with making the characters sound their age when they are actually around twelve.

This one is no exception. Although where usually that means the characters speak with an advanced vocabulary and act with extraordinary maturity and character; This story's kids come off feeling like 6-8 year olds and the adults talk to them as such.

It is a bit off-putting and left me wishing this story would state explicitly that second year at Hogwarts was equivalent to second year of elementary school so that the way characters talk and act in this Story's AU made sense.

Well if you're not going to worship Dumbledore's wrinkly old ass then you are going dark. Harry my boy.

Harry needs someone to be there for him and what does he get - a godfather that puts him last on the list and a pseudo uncle that kisses dumbles ass while both ignore what Harry's telling them. Sad thing is Harry resents Snape so much that he can't see that Snape is being there for him.

If Harry moves in with Sirius it'll be a case of the child being the parent.

I guess the headbastard Dumbledore should have let Harry stay with the Weasleys.

Well the death eater already has more of a heart than Albus Dumbledore

And just who in the hell is Dumbledore to keep a child in an abusive house. He's no relation, not an official, he's nobody.
Also I get t so frustrated by writers who make Harry go oh okay headmaster I'll stay and be a good boy! I put it down to them not ever being abused or knowing an abused child. I was abused and so we're a lot of my friends. And let me tell you - abused children are angry as hell by the time they are hard age. Maybe not to their abusers, but to everyone else, especially those they know won't abuse them.
Just once I'd like to read a story where Harry tells Dumbledore to get fucked.

I love how self self-centered Harry's self pity is. while he shows empathy and concern for his friends with unpleasant home lives which is nearly all his friends, he does not think often of his lucky friends. he would realize that they too feel a lack of choice in their lives. Ron wishes he were more important in his family and that they were richer. Hermione would want her parents to have magic. Etc etc. he would see that no one has control of their own lives and everyone has desires that they will never satisfy. he would still be unhappy but the self pity would ease up and he would greatly lessen his pain. But Harry is a teen and he is doing what every teen has ever done and angsting all over himself and I love it.

I am so in awe of your talent. I will never understand how you can imagine so many different, recognizable, complex characters and how they would interact. I pay attention to people and care deeply for a few of them but honestly i have no clue how anyone but myself thinks. I believe most (even those who think they can) can't. you have a wonderful brain so thanks for sharing it with me.

The way the beast is described it remains me and Hermious Mora from Skyrim. The creature who runs the place you go to when you battle Mirrack.

I read so many stories that I sometime forget which stories is one I am looking for when I think of an event that happens. This story has the event. I am not even sure if I have ever read this story all the way through though at this point I have skimmed to this chapter and will have to actually read this story from the begging.