Reviews for Extinction
Kasharo chapter 2 . 3/27
Excellent chapter. interesting approach to the crossover, thanks for sharing this idea with us. I am looking forward to reading more.
Umbra.Venator chapter 2 . 2/15
Good chapter, looking forward to seeing the next :)
reality deviant chapter 2 . 2/13
good overall-i will follow it more on SB rather then here, but this fic is not ignored.
Just a Crazy-Man chapter 2 . 2/13
Cool
thunder18 chapter 2 . 2/13
Great chapter Update soon
Sajuuk chapter 2 . 2/13
hello lol
good chapter
i can't wait what atlantis and the odyssey will do with mass effect technology like the omnitool, armour, weapons...
please write more
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sajuuk
orionastro chapter 2 . 2/13
another great chapter, let's see how the 1st contact will happen between the Alliance and Atlantis, Can hardly wait for the next chapters
Apollonir chapter 2 . 2/13
Bloody hell, this was an EPIC read! I am so looking forward to seeing the contact between SGC and the Alliance (and by proxy the goddamn Council bosh'tets). Really great chapter. I hope to see an update soon :D take your time with it.
tf330129 chapter 2 . 2/13
Keep it up :)
SG ST SW chapter 1 . 1/27
nice story please update soon
Umbra.Venator chapter 1 . 1/23
Awesome story so far, looking forward to more :)
nikikins chapter 1 . 1/4
Really enjoyed this first chapter. Please keep chapters coming, looking forward to chapter 2
rantingbanshee chapter 1 . 12/31/2016
I'm sensing a nerf here. At full power, Atlantis could curbstomp the Reapers and all the citadel races with alarming ease.

Draining Atlantis power is a major Deus ex machina to curtail Stargate technology which in hindsight is not a good thing to do in a story. Sure balancing a story makes it interesting but it's completely unnecessary when the people of Atlantis would refrain from entering any kind of war with the God-like technological marvel (Atlantis) at the fore mainly because SG1 and SGA team have a deep sense of moral compass. Not only that, but they wouldn't waste the power of the only 3 ZPM's in existence on a whim to become warmongers and annihilate a technologically inferior species.

There was no need to nerf Atlantis because the Atlanteans wouldn't enter a war unless absolutely necessary therefore they wouldn't have as big an impact on the story as they don't curbstomp everyone at the beginning of a narrative.

Also, if the wraith, who are far more advanced technologically compared to the Alliance, could not detect Atlantis cloaked (with stargate activating), then there is no way that a measly Alliance Kodiak with inferior scanning tech could detect the power surges under the powerful cloak of Atlantis. Not happening!

Lastly, if it took tens' of thousands of years to drain all 3 zpm's under sustained activation of Atlantis' powerful shields that constantly fended off the crushing atmospheric pressures of the ocean, then there is no way that all 3 zpm's could be drained in under 3 hours due to damaged conduits. It took over 18 hours for 1 zpm (already very depleted zpm) to be drained in the show and the zpm was already near depletion before the brush with the replicator beam. Rodney said in the show that the 1 zpm that they had was already under 10% before they lifted Atlantis into space and needed the extra power boost from the geothermal power station under the ocean. It took 18 hours for the zpm to drain to critical levels with damaged conduits.

There is no way that 3 fully charged zpm's would be drained in 3 hours! Do you have any idea how much power is in each zpm? They output power equivalent to a yellow dwarf star so imagine how much power 3 of them output.
Apollonir chapter 1 . 12/30/2016
Holy crap, the premises are fantastic! I strongly encourage you to pursue this story :D
Writing style is good, grammar is top notch, plot is intriguing... hell, a city... the ME residents will be in for a shock. Maybe they can even save Shepard with a teleport.

You've earned a new fav & follower. And Happy New Year!
tf330129 chapter 1 . 12/27/2016
Keep it up :)
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