Reviews for Enfer
ShatterTheHeavens chapter 5 . 1/17/2017
Poor Nao. Getting caught up in the middle of a hell storm between two men, whom not only "like" her but are basically at each others throats due to the Kira situation.
Yeah. I don't blame her. I'd go for a drink as well, even if I'd be underage. Heck, forget one drink, I'd go for several. With some Scotch, that's the best kind.
Leia -san chapter 4 . 1/14/2017
Wow! I totally did not see this coming :O I kinda expected her to get involved, but not this way. And I love how naturally you have assimilated Nao to the position of "pawn in the middle of two crushing forces" and I also love the way she is rocking this position and making the best of it for her own benefit.
And for the record Nao's dad is awesome!
I look forward to reading th next chapter! :3
Guest chapter 4 . 1/13/2017
Just love it.
Wish you update just that fast always...
Andrahz chapter 4 . 1/13/2017
This is coming along nicely! I hope you continue this story, Nao is a very interesting character!
Andrahz chapter 1 . 1/13/2017
This certainly looks interesting! I'll be following this story :)
harlibarli chapter 4 . 1/13/2017
This chapter was a pleasant surprise. Is Nao going to pretend to date Light even if that sounds horrible? Never liked Light. L is L, I suppose. Sounds like something an L would do. So does this mean she is going to help him bring down Kira? I liked the chapter.
Sancha.panza chapter 4 . 1/13/2017
Wao another chapter already! Thank you!
Now that she's forced to get involved things are going to get serious real fast (not that they weren't before, just not for her I guess, haha). And obviously, Light had to go and do that, geez. Expected, really, but perhaps her plans could still work even without going out with Light, if she told him that its too soon or that she needs a little time to consider that kinda stuff? They can still be allies anyways...or was that her plan too? Get involved with Kira in that way, cause he knew he was gonna try to do it? Hah, she's really gonna be one-uping them both, Light and L won't know what hit them!
Really interesting character for her dad, cool and collected, apparently lazy as Nao, or at least approving of her... they kinda remind me of the Narutoverse's Nara clan.
Guest chapter 3 . 1/12/2017
I love nao! She reminds me of how I act sometime. Always excepts free food and coffee with list of sugar. And for the fact that she doesn't give a shit about the whole damn Kira case.
Janeash chapter 3 . 1/12/2017
Update soon plzz
Sancha.panza chapter 3 . 1/12/2017
Thank you for the fast update! I was looking forward to L telling her who he is :D
As always she's not really interested about Kira, they're both kinda making it a competition about who will "get her on their side" but Nao couldn't care less about the subject they're obsessed with, heh.
Is Light trying to get her to like him, or to make her think he's interested in her that way? Manipulative little git... it's hilarious how she's just like "god he's so cute I want to pinch his cheeks" lol
Can't wait for Nao's reaction to L! Thank you again :-)
DevilsTune chapter 3 . 1/11/2017
Haha, that was the perfect sentence to end on it made me laugh. I like that Nao is in the middle and yet she's trying to ignore both L and Light it's great. I'm also glad that she's aware of Light's nature. Again til next chapter,
DevilsTune
harlibarli chapter 3 . 1/11/2017
Finally he tells her he is L, I wonder how she reacts or maybe doesn't react because perhaps she easily accepted that he could be L or if she didn't believe him at first? Can't wait to hear her reply and I can see how Light is trying to manipulate Nao in subtle ways such as giving her bentos and buying coffee or touching hands for a few seconds to get her to join the dark side or something. I wander if she can see what he might be doing or if she even cares. I loved the chapter.
Yuki-Infel chapter 2 . 1/10/2017
*bites thumb* this is interesting. Do you have any plan to involve her with the task force or will she just be a bystander?
Sancha.panza chapter 2 . 1/10/2017
Haha the Icy Staring Contest passes over her head and she just ignores them in favor of her muffin,
I really like Nao! Even if you don't make this L/Nao (wich I personally would like), those two as friends would be nice too! L needs more hugs and friends... especially non-massmurder-trying-to-kill-him ones.
Love how L recognises a kindred spirit when she grabs 7 sugar packets
I hope you continue this! I really look forward to it!
preferablynonexistent chapter 2 . 1/9/2017
I love where this story is going its interesting and unique, I'm really liking Nao too.
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