Reviews for Within You Is The Light Of Thousand Suns
Guest chapter 9 . 12/28/2016
A ball? In the house of gloom and doom? Who is invited? The order of Phoenix? Half of whom Harry doesn't know ? Isn't Sirius a fugitive? 12 Grimmald is under fidelius, why reveal the location? Isn't Harry supposed to be hidden? Blaze sneaking off in the night, without letting anyone know until later; she is literally Harry's bodyguard not very intelligent. til later
Millie chapter 7 . 12/28/2016
Why copy the plot hole JKR wrote? To have Harry fly to Grimmald was stupid. How many went along? What if the disillusionment failed? Simple answer, apparation! Hard to trace, nearly instantaneous, and far safer. So far, Blaze is not a likable character. Remus and Sirius are insipid. A werewolf fainting from a motorcycle ride? In the belief every story deserves a chance, will continue reading. Thank you
Michand chapter 20 . 12/23/2016
Sirius won't be happy about her saying Severus and right to him aswell
SB- Potterhead Budgie Lover chapter 1 . 12/18/2016
its great to read