Reviews for Within You Is The Light Of Thousand Suns
Chelsea always chapter 57 . 7/10
Oh man can harry be any more stupid. Can't wait for more
Michand chapter 57 . 7/10
Always good to have abit of tension even though i hope Harry and Blaze work it out in the end
Chelsea always chapter 56 . 7/4
Loved it and happy you posted
Chelsea always chapter 55 . 6/3
That was awesome and can't wait for next chapter
Chelsea always chapter 54 . 4/27
Great Chapter, love Amelia bones and love Blaze
Chelsea always chapter 53 . 4/19
Have to say this so far is wonderful, cant wait to see where you go with this.
Chelsea always chapter 23 . 4/17
Wonderful story can't wait to read more
Namra1482 chapter 52 . 3/28
Hi, just wanted to say that this is an amazing plot. Really got hooked to this story. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Val chapter 11 . 3/14
I think you night want to go back through this and just edit somethings. You're sentences and use of words is kind of confusing and your grammar needs to be checked. Also so of the ideas, you're coming up with like the whole ball at Grimmauld place thing needs to be revised. Other than this I think you have a good idea but it just needs to be developed more.
Guest chapter 9 . 12/28/2016
A ball? In the house of gloom and doom? Who is invited? The order of Phoenix? Half of whom Harry doesn't know ? Isn't Sirius a fugitive? 12 Grimmald is under fidelius, why reveal the location? Isn't Harry supposed to be hidden? Blaze sneaking off in the night, without letting anyone know until later; she is literally Harry's bodyguard not very intelligent. til later
Millie chapter 7 . 12/28/2016
Why copy the plot hole JKR wrote? To have Harry fly to Grimmald was stupid. How many went along? What if the disillusionment failed? Simple answer, apparation! Hard to trace, nearly instantaneous, and far safer. So far, Blaze is not a likable character. Remus and Sirius are insipid. A werewolf fainting from a motorcycle ride? In the belief every story deserves a chance, will continue reading. Thank you
Michand chapter 20 . 12/23/2016
Sirius won't be happy about her saying Severus and right to him aswell
Eradicate My Account chapter 1 . 12/18/2016
its great to read