Reviews for The Battle Never Ends |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i am the bone of my sword |
![]() ![]() ![]() kinda outta charecter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Have to agree with the other reviewer , dxd God and irl one aren't the same The three O's don't apply |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So much politics going in the background for sona and baels game. This your addition aint it? U mean, i know eventually it gets said that the rating games are corrupt but its not elaborated in detailed process. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even on a 3rd read, this arc of tatsumi in agk still throws me off. Like why? Maybe next chapter wil explain it better n i'll understand it better now that im specifically trying to do so. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Unlike this worlds, they didnt monlogue at every opportunity." You hate exposition and inflated egos, we get it. Ophis bitchslaps gabriel and serafall! Wow. O_O And now she has a third eye! |
![]() ![]() ![]() /s Oh wow. What are the odds that tatsumi would gain instinctual primordial information that perfectly explains the actions of an allmighty unknowable God which were an enigma even to his own children? -_- Like seriously, its not even information he got from an epiphany. Its like someone fucking possessed him and used him as exposition mouthpiece. /s "oh yeah, its super obvious that seeing the past and future wouldve turn someone into an empty shell of a person and thats why god pulled a suicide by satans all those millenia ago. I got it instantly. Why didnt you old fossils figure this out?" -_- Yes tatsumi, its not your fault, theres nothing you couldve done, so fucking accept it already, stop with the self loathing edgelord party, and start the road to healing already! (Reads A/N) "god is an omniscient, omnipotent, omnibenevolent entity" (burst out laughing) an allmighty all good god that rules all and the universe is not a perfect paradise? (Rolls eyes) DxD bible God *is not* the RL 'omnipotent' god that we *BELIEVE* him to be. They are two different gods. "No way that 4 prime satans would be in top 10 or 20 of strongest in dxd" says who? You? And what makes you the authority on dxd power level? "I wasnt counting on a last second miracle. This aint a shonen manga." (Rolls eyes at the 4th wall and canon lean) Welp, lets see what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() TWELVE devil wings on serafall... WHY?! Why does every single fanfic author do this?! devils DO NOT have multiples wings! they have ONE set (2 wings) no matter how bullshit OP they are. you know who does have multiple wings? FAMILY MEMBERS OF THE ORIGINAL SATANS! vali and rizevim lucifer, igvlid and katerea leviathan, shalba beelzebub and creuserey asmodeus. multiple wings as power levels only works for angels and fallen! if a devil is not related to the original four satan bloodlines, they DONT HAVE multiple wings. |
![]() ![]() ![]() There’s a high school dxd fanfic called the lone dragon emperor and it basically does end with the scenario that you described. Issei in that story suffered so much was so broken (think tatsumi if bennia died) that he basically gave into his rage and anger and essentially became a psychopath. Kinda fitting for an ending I guess. This would not have worked here like you did describe. Sure it would have been cathartic in a way but there’d really be no where to take the story. I’m glad you went the route you did. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this is great. just a little too dark for my liking but i should expect that from an Akae Ga Kill cross over. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hell yeah Akame is here! This is the chance to make the bonds between them romantic. Please do it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Personally I think Ravel and Hikaru will be joining with Tatsumi. Either as romantic partners or just as siblings beyond blood. As for Ravel and him having sex last chapter? Yeah I didn’t buy it. Tatsumi isn’t the kind of guy to take advantage of someone while they are at their most vulnerable like that. Hikaru at first I thought really was a bitch but then as the fight progressed and she didn’t press her advantage so many times or made so many ‘mistakes’ while attacking him or how she managed to get her friends in his Chest but didn’t go for the kill then and there like she said she wanted to? So I’m glad she’s not under his thrall. I’m still hopeful that some other AGK characters will become part of the main group. Like Akame and Chelsea. Those two are my favorites of AGK. |