Ooooh this is good
Original take on a dxd fic, big plus!
FAV/FOLLOWED

Them living though the snow and the girl bleeding from the nose reminds me of a movie i watched

This is just really interesting and I can't wait for more

When will you be able to update?

Great story, i hope you update it soon. The only thing that i found strange was that shirou didn't use the memories from a knife that belonged to a hunter, that way he would have easily skinned and cleaned the rabbit

Interesante historia espero que algún momento futuro puedas continuar con ella .
Espero que este shirou pueda ser ma poderoso que lo qye llegó hacer archer . Una sugerencia ahora que shirou esta en universo de DxD creo que el tendrá una gran fuente de mana (od) para su pueda usar fantasmas nobles para poderosos de rango ( a,b ) ; pero si haces que shirou pueda usar otras armas aparte de espadas como lanzas , hachas , arcos , monturas serian genial para su tu shirou sea vastante único .
Estadísticas para shirou :
Fuerza : c ; b ( con refuerzo )
Velocidad : b ; b( con refuerzo )
Mana : a
Resistencia física : b
Resistencia mágica : c
Fantasma noble : e , d , c , b , a , ex
Bueno esa es solo mí opinión personal espero que no te aya molestado .

Very interesting setup.

Joj a good start, i like it :D

So..Where is his reinforcement magic?
Those things are very important in fighting against those with supernatural abilities...And it is also amongs his few signature move...

A little more consistency, please. Excalibur can be Traced, but not used to it's fullest? I call bullshit.

If Shirou can project Excalibur, then MAYBE its legend should be enough to empower it to use an Excaliblast, no? THIS IS YOUR STORY! IT'S A FAN- MADE STORY! Don't be afraid to step away from canon. And don't let canon dictate where you want this story to go. There's so much potential here.

Dumb. He's far too weak to trace excalibur. But since you fracked that up anyway, let's just say he DID manage to trace it. It's the sword of promised victory for a reason! You need to drop excalibur in this. Or, If you keep, it you need to have Shirou kick ass with it. You can't have a shirou who's capable of tracing excalibur and sucks ass with it.

Hope this is continued! Love it so far!

Cool

I like this. I like this a lot.

More please!

Really good Fanfiction!
Hope for more soon :)