Reviews for Summoner of Death |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story kinda felt like a movie in a sense. In my opinion |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! I love this story! Could you please, please, please make a sequel to this? It should include Luna and the regular characters, maybe Shanks as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, another story finished! Congratulations :D! Really love it how Law had acquired a new ability and I'm wondering if will use his Summoning powers. Though I think he will still rely on his devil fruit abilities and maybe he will use the summons only in dire situations. Just like Elementals, the Summoners are unknown by many and I think Law will not risk their identities to the world. The World Government may either persecute or use them to their own advantage if that happens. Thanks for the updates :D. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now, this chapter makes it clearer now. The Mortem Orb is not that evil at all which makes me remember something wherein that all things were created good. It is up to us, humans, who make it evil. It is like that the saying of 'money is evil' is ambiguous, it is more like 'the improper use of money makes it evil.' Like Shanks and Neo scene. Like the way how you do the imagery of Neo's broken mind. Also, a white heart with black spots is just a perfect representation of her bond with Law. Everything in that scene is just perfect. Really kind of amusing how Mortem is distracted with Law's lovey-dovey thoughts about Neo. Makes me curious if he also sees some of the erotic thoughts Law had with Neo before, lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WAT IT ALREADY ENDEDare you going to make a new story? PM me if you are going to please~ |
![]() ![]() Amazing just wow AWESOME STORY WELL DONE! |
![]() ![]() Oh this is getting good so excited AWESOMENESS MORE CHAPTERS! |
![]() ![]() I loved this chapter. If morten isn't inside law or anyone it still can walk around outside zion? I'm curious about it. It didn't confront the concil before because it need a body, if it wasn't sealed it could fight the consil without a body? I love this fic, its so good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just wondering why the other Summoners are not intrigued on their Council. If they had seen that the members of the Council still look young in spite of their age, then they should sense that something is wrong. Just like the other reviewer says, it seems the Mortem Orb is not that bad. It was the Council itself who is responsible for the mysterious deaths. The orb wanted to have revenge but will it stop when the Council is dead? Thanks for the update :D. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter is good. After so much tension between them, at least they had managed to settle it. Like it how Neo uses her pheromones to dominate Law. Quite unique that they spend some of their quality time in their snow leopard form. Even one of Law's kink had been satisfied. Men. All they think about is sex, lol. My only comment here is that Sanji is willing to left Strawhats for Neo. I don't know if it was meants as a joke but seriously, Sanji is not like this. He is very loyal to Luffy and he will not sway his belief just for a girl. Eeep, that was creepy. It was like a scene in a horror movie. Good thing Neo reacts immediately to the situation. |
![]() ![]() I don't like it controling law, but i hope the orb kill the shit concil guys. They were the ones killing people when every one know what luna said was true i guess they won't care if they died. What idk is if the orb is bad too, it will take control even after killing them, i hope its not. It have a animal form? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no, there is something wrong with Law. The bad thing is that Law hasn't noticed it at all. Law will never say no to Neo when it comes to her and their baby's health. He is now prioritizing his training over everything. Seems like he is being controlled to do this. Pretty nice that Luna is getting close to them most especially to Neo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I agree with one reviewer. Lion and snow leopard are big carnivorous cats. They like to play with their prey before they kill it, pretty sadistic. Lavi may act shy and awkward but once he got into a teaching mode, some of his inferiority complex had backed down. I think he secretly likes hard challenge so having seen Law's progress in training had somehow brought out his wild side. I don't know if Law's unusual playful side is due to his animal guardian or due to the dark shadows that might be lurking inside him. Like the prank they put on Bao. Wonder if that scene had penetrated Bao's thick skull. LOL, I can't imagine it that he is such a little pervert or 'playful' back then. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Law's crew admiring their captain during his training reminds me of a certain doujin wherein his crewmates cheered on him while he is fighting Kidd. LOL, they are like fanboys there and the Kidd's crew kept on asking themselves if they will also do the same thing. What the heck is happening on the island? With those mysterious deaths, I think the Council should be concerned but it looks like they are not working on it. Did they know something and they didn't wish to bring out the details so that it will not cause panic among the citizens? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Like it how Elek seems to be aware how close is Neo to Topaz. He knows that Neo is overprotective over her sister and he quite respected it. Like it how Neo had become mature in this situation. She's more like a mother than a sister. However, she understands that though Topaz is loyal to her, that doesn't mean that she own Topaz' life. Really love it how you show it in this chapter. Now, I'm so curious on what Luna knows. She may act hostile on the pirates but in this chapter, she shows that she cares. That thing easily controls Law when he uses his aura in almost full force. |