I enjoyed what you have here. Thank you for writing it!

If I were trying to explain ZPM sizes to Jack, I'd use machine guns as an analogy. Daniel might not think to do it, but I'd describe it as having a BUNCH of ammo for an M240 machine gun, but unfortunately, the only machine gun you have is an M249. In case you didn't get that either, an M240 uses 7.62x51mm ammunition (about .30 caliber if you prefer non-metric), while an M249 uses 5.56x45mm ammunition (about .22 caliber, which is what an M-16 uses).

The lemon allergy is played for laughs in Stargate Atlantis, but realistically, if McKay's response to being threatened with a lemon was to pull out a Zat and shoot the person holding the lemon with it once, that would be LESS force than McKay was being threatened with, as well as, by US laws, completely legal self defense by McKay. If someone were to actually try to use the lemon on McKay, two Zat shots would be EQUAL force under the law, and McKay would be cleared of wrongdoing by the investigation that would follow the death.

Ah, there is the Asgard arrogance we know and don't love. And I suspect it will bite them in their naked butts as usual. For a supposedly hyper-intelligent species, they're completely TERRIBLE at learning from their own mistakes, aren't they?

This is a brilliant fanfiction I look farward to a future chapter!

I really got turned off by the alterans using human idioms and phrases... 'put 2 and 2 together... 'send them packing' etc... those are uniquely human phrases brought about by our specific development... why would they have/use those terms?

This has been a wonderful story to read. I have loved the positive relationship between SG1 and BSG. I loved seeing all of the guest cross-overs. My husband caught the Expanse character too.

" -Oh, Jonas Quinn. He came, as we requested. Once we get past the introduction part, think we can tell him our little secret?"
- One thing at a time Danny. He won't be a member of SG-1 this time. Unless you still want to do the whole ascension thing?"
- Don't know yet. Besides, he proved that he could be trusted in the other time line, Jack."
- Still, he was a poor substitution for you. Just saying. After a while, we will tell him. Until then, keep quiet! "

Jonas Quinn was at least as good as Dr. Jackson. He learned very quickly and had excellent insights; he was able to replace Daniel in the team.

Great beginning, gang-busters middle, then the last few chapters you just had too many plot threads going. You need a map and a compass to keep track.

The final straw was throw that bigoted lying pile of manure in human form, Tucker Carlson, into the mix. If HE'S what they rely on for "news" the Terran Federation is doomed.

I read your note at the end. Jesus Christ. How old are you?

I'm cringing every time I see "randevu."

Is Daniel Jackson a Number Seven in this story?

not sure i like non canon enemies from races that didnt exist in either stories unless im missing something? always simply feels desperate to make the story interesting when it actually detracts from it instead.

arent the eyes of the gao'uld precursor ZPM power modules? or am i remembering another fanfiction?

THE BEST. VERY INTERESTING STORY. I really want to continue this story. The author is just super.