" -Oh, Jonas Quinn. He came, as we requested. Once we get past the introduction part, think we can tell him our little secret?"
- One thing at a time Danny. He won't be a member of SG-1 this time. Unless you still want to do the whole ascension thing?"
- Don't know yet. Besides, he proved that he could be trusted in the other time line, Jack."
- Still, he was a poor substitution for you. Just saying. After a while, we will tell him. Until then, keep quiet! "

Jonas Quinn was at least as good as Dr. Jackson. He learned very quickly and had excellent insights; he was able to replace Daniel in the team.

Great beginning, gang-busters middle, then the last few chapters you just had too many plot threads going. You need a map and a compass to keep track.

The final straw was throw that bigoted lying pile of manure in human form, Tucker Carlson, into the mix. If HE'S what they rely on for "news" the Terran Federation is doomed.

I read your note at the end. Jesus Christ. How old are you?

I'm cringing every time I see "randevu."

Is Daniel Jackson a Number Seven in this story?

not sure i like non canon enemies from races that didnt exist in either stories unless im missing something? always simply feels desperate to make the story interesting when it actually detracts from it instead.

arent the eyes of the gao'uld precursor ZPM power modules? or am i remembering another fanfiction?

THE BEST. VERY INTERESTING STORY. I really want to continue this story. The author is just super.

So what happened here? You're just done? No more? Fcking bipolar assholes. Can't finish anything to completion?

You glazed over A LOT of the growing pains involved in magically standardizing multiple inherently different militaries with inherently different military structures and equipment designs. Installing 1000 km wide shield generators under a mountain is also a bit of a stretch :) Logically if they could power a shield capable of withstanding orbital attack over that wide an area... making the bubble smaller should increase the resistance of the shield and make any vessel equipped with it next to invulnerable.
It took a ZPM to shield a city ship...but you're covering a much larger area without one?

Please finish

Amazing epic story! Hope you continue it at some point! :)

More updates, more chapters. Waiting for more updates

any more?

Greeting wonderful author fanfictionfanaticX

I love all of your stories and wondering if crossing over with Kathy Coleman - Holly from Land of the Lost might be an interesting idea. Just an idea highlighted for your kind notice

Other question someone asked Wilkins75 in his posted about atomic number of element zero

Thank you