Reviews for The Betrothal Situation: Dating Susan Bones
1Rue chapter 1 . 7/13/2017
I find it strange how to switch to one event to another. Like when he was kissing Susan and he happened to open his eyes and see Umbrigde on the map or when Hannah suddenly left the room without Susan, who was looking her way, noticing.
cuby18 chapter 9 . 6/24/2017
Great story!
justanfanboy chapter 9 . 3/6/2017
i must say, there are really large holes in the story wich u can fill up with u own story instead of leaving it blank, its very strange to read now
HoneyBear84 chapter 7 . 3/4/2017
Love it as always and can't wait for the next update
Dault3883 Barron Backslash chapter 5 . 3/2/2017
short chapter
Dault3883 Barron Backslash chapter 4 . 2/15/2017
please provide longer updates
HoneyBear84 chapter 4 . 2/14/2017
love it as always and can't wait for the next update
HoneyBear84 chapter 1 . 2/14/2017
love it as always and can't wait for the next update
ThunderSphinx chapter 2 . 2/4/2017
You have too many stories. You can't possibly update them all :(
HoneyBear84 chapter 3 . 1/27/2017
love it and can't wait for the next update
A German Guest chapter 3 . 1/24/2017
One of the better stories among those started in the last few months.
Dault3883 Barron Backslash chapter 2 . 12/25/2016
good chapter but please dont let umbridge get harry's firebolt
harryislife chapter 1 . 12/24/2016
Great start, love Harry/Susan
Baby Huey chapter 1 . 12/23/2016
The "girl talk" in Susan's dorm seems too... American. Megan and Sophie seem like a bad Hollywood portrayal of a southern black girl. It just seems wrong to have them speak like this. But then, your profile does say you are from England, so I guess that you would have a better grasp on what a teenage British girl would talk like.