Reviews for Breathe
Diablo Priest chapter 1 . 6/29
Very nice! Subversive, tender, and suspenseful. I especially like the last line.
jasminmonster chapter 1 . 12/27/2016
This is amazing! Your writing style is beautiful. Please continue Writing this story!
joejan7 chapter 1 . 12/26/2016
this is a beautiful story that contains lots of emotion. i love the idea Carol and Terese to start a family with a new baby. would you continue the story? please
Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2016
You're writing evokes so many emotions...thank you for posting
wheresmyluce chapter 1 . 12/24/2016
So many raw emotions filling such a short piece. You honestly do have a gift with words. I was lulled into a false since of security annd then... WHAM-O! You through in the tension. Had me holding my breath, waiting for the outcome. Very well done!