Wow.. Just wow... It was and is a wonderful journey with this fiction... I just loved it..
I seriously hope u don't abandoned this lovly baby on the streets... And come back to complete it...
Hope Harry shares his being potter to Neville and Hermione or they may feel betrayed...
Waiting for ur update eagarly...

If you tell your readers that some throwaway sentence is foreshadowing, then the mystery and excitement is lost.

Any updates? I kinda enjoy reading it. Intercepting it.

Great story dude I cant wait for the next update to come

This is a really well thought out adaption of the adopted story. I would like for more updates due to the plot and the affect upon the reader - I.E. myself.

Well done at bringing both Supernatural and Harry Potter together in ways others couldn’t. I found this fan fiction first and it has inspired me to read the original which gave you the idea.

Post an update as often as you can and attempt to be consistent, Gabriel and Crowley are balanced in influence however I personally feel that the plot needs a little more pace to it.

Well done and hope more reviews are good criticism rather than horrible criticism.

There’s also the possibility that he couldn’t really sense the horcruxes, only know that they had been destroyed, or at the very least he couldn’t automatically sense horcruxes, the one’s he could keep track off were because knew they existed when he created them, and so maybe he also added charms/enchantments to allow him to sense their location, this would explain why he always seemed to think there were only seven, as he couldn’t tell there was one in Harry until he “killed” him and felt it’s destruction, presumably this is also the reason why all the other Horcruxes had such abnormal durability, while Harry did not, in all the other cases Voldemort realized just how easily breakable all his little phylacteries were, so he piled on defensive enchantments on all of them with the possibly exception of Nagini as she could for the most part defend herself (note she was the only Horcux he decided to keep close to him at all times once he had figured out the main Trio knew about them and were looking for them). Also we never really saw his immediate reaction to a Horcrux being destroyed, at least not from his perspective, for all we knew maybe what he was feeling was part of his soul returning to the main body. Admittedly I’m going off what I remember from the movies, but anytime we saw him after the immediate destruction of a Horcux his expressions seemed less like “oh Merlin the pain” and more like “oh balls, I just screwed up”, which would make sense when you consider the ritual used to revive him didn’t seem like it worked right (if his deformed and almost corpse like complexion were any indication), so the fact his soul wasn’t in his body might have been the only thing keeping him alive.

Please continue?

Aye Harry Daphne hope it's true I really like that pairing hope daph in this is the cool badass type

If he really goes to Hogwarts which would be dumb as fuck mind you if he's not Slytherin I'll rage so fkin hard

more. just, more. your shit is some good shit. i love it. i'd love to help out but sadly can't due to theses being an ass.

I love this so much! At first, I didn't like the way you write. It sort of choppy but along the way it made the story more interesting and also your writing improved (correct me if I'm wrong?). Anyways, I thought you were going to be one of those writers who liked the idea of good guy Albus but gosh the way you slowly uncovered his greasy personality is so —! 15/10 would recommend this to my bff.

better question why is harry?

okay, because i am just so confused by shit in here, though i will keep reading because i enjoy your premis and want to see what happens, i need to clarify when your timeline is, because it seems to be both later than the movies and the books, since in the books harry is born in 1980 and the first movie came out in 2001, which at 11 would have harry born in 1990, neither of these scenarios include iphones, and the first doesnt include flip phones and dexter didnt come out until 2006, so if this is set in 2005 with harry about to be 7, he was born in 1998, the year the first book was published, and seriously your timeline has me confused as shit. also the show supernatural didnt start until 2005 so random references to that also have gotten me confused for the timeline. and now back to the middle of the chapter where i was when i had to come and ask.

I completely agree with Harry’s favorite doctor. David Tennant was incredibly. I don’t think any other actor can pull off all the different facets of the doctor as well as he can, especially the intimidating and slightly terrifying side you see when the doctor gets serious. When David Tennant did it I always found my self thinking, “oh shit this guy means business and no one can stop him,” and I just never get the vibe from the other actors who played the doctor.

shit fic