thank you for the story so far

“He decided to try cake for the first time in his life.

It was a Chocolate Fudge Devil's Food Cake.

It was delicious.

He tried the Angel Food Cake next.

He decided it needed more chocolate.”

Best lines I have ever read. lol

thank you for the story so far keep up the great work

thank you for the story so far

getting good thanks

wow poor Harry

I hate how much Harry is nerfed. He should at least be on the level of Jesse. If not bordering Jack.
He was super weak in this story.

Gabriel stood up, sighing in frustration."I did the best I could, but the injuries are simply too old. Internally, I fixed him up all neat and tidy. A constant diet of foods rich in essential vitamins and nutrients should take care of the malnutrition in a few weeks. Work and light exercise will fix up the weakness and fatigue he has as well distribute the new mass he will get. His skin is a different story – the scars and burns have to stay, and the emotional damage is done. I should warn you, x-rays will still show all your old injuries but healed up. Make sure you don't end up in a hospital, or there will be questions how you functioning at all."

This is wrong. Archangels have been shown to be able to do complete biokinesis. Even lesser angels can do that, too. Castiel created a body from scratch for Dean. He had been burned to ash, given a hunter’s funeral. There are many other examples of being torn apart and repaired completely. Old injuries can be removed, too. They have fleshcrafting. The only thing they can’t heal on a human’s body is when it starts to fall apart because the vessel can no longer contain the powers it holds (Like Lucifer’s vessel skin falling off and apart).

Hey there, I just want to say that I'm loving the story. You really put a lot of thought and research into this. I also love the fact that you put the Preacher into this. I also love the show. I can't wait to see how this story would further unfold.

hermione has been to wizarding world once how would she know this stuff

Why the fuck did you switch from third person to first? At least stay consistent in the story.

absolutely love this story 3
do you plan on continuing this or? I really hope you do continue as this is just so good!

I see Hagrid has taken high school education in grammar, an american raised Harry speaks like a formal brit...and no one speaks vritish...

Actually: I can't tell people apart. At all. Because everyone uses the same language.

To make my point on the difference:

JK.R. Hagrid: "Yer a wizard Harry!"

Your Hagrid: "You are a wizard mr. Potter."

Authentic American: "Cool, I'm a Wizard!"

Your American: "Cool, I am a Wizard."

Brits would insert british expressions like "Bloody Hell" "Blimey" or, if you speak with a liverpool accent like Constantine; "Neat, innit?" (Neat, isn't it.)

Point is: Try to add small details and levels of formality and education -or lack thereof- to your characters.

Also...

PLEASE don't try to fit something from the origional book into your fic when it makes no sense.

Hermioned did NOT end up in Gryffindor because of Ron, but because dumbledore had gone there.

That said, if Harry made her doubt the validity of books, and also made her doubt dumbledore, she could still have ended in ravenclaw.

Just think of cause and effect, and use LOGIC and Harry's current personality to decide how he'll act and what happens from there.

He is NOT the person he was in canon, and will naturally not act the same way.

I really like your story and I hope you write more for it

This is amazing please keep more chapters coming also will harry ever reveal who he really is?