Reviews for Older Brother |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyable story. Look forward to the next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting situation with Lily and James having an oops baby. Enjoyed the read |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story. |
![]() ![]() boring i have a good name for the borther prince |
![]() ![]() ![]() Biology says start talking about sex when kids are 11 or 12 because they can get pregnant about then. The 15 year old thing threw me a bit, are there really parents waiting that long? I hope the kid would come back with Mom gave me a book 3 years ago or school covered this twice already. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good. I liked it and look forward to reading the sequel next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A much better Harry-has-a-brother tale than most I've read. Would love to see more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful stuff. Harry makes a fantastic older brother, boi needed siblings to fuss over. |
![]() ![]() ![]() and lily's reaction to dumblrdork is utterly stupid, she only berates him thats all, instead of outing him as headmaster for attacking a student specially her son and that was only reaction to just yell she's utterly stupid |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is kinda bad compared to your other work and this is really stupid for all of his intelligence his decision making is utterly dreadful stupid instead of waiting for the aurors what this stupid do go with the flow and fight for the philosophers stone how stupid and he fucking stupidly also bought the other first year baggage so stupid, and if this is already stupid how more for the sequel |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bullshitting wands nice. bullshit |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seems all too easy for Harry; how does he stack up magically to Albus? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Again I've read a few stories and you are fantastic! A story on Harry not being the boy-who-lived but the protector and big brother of him with a none potter parent bashing theme, I love it! Haven't read the sequel yet but I will do. The funniest thing is that's a rarity to find where Lily and James live and a sibling of Harry's declared the chosen one without any potter parent bashing on that part. A fantastic job. |