Reviews for Older Brother |
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![]() ![]() Following the cliche of Dumbles being a manipulative/crazy old fart and have bamf Lily taken up to eleven, huh? Typical. I really dislike Lily being put on a pedestal and always the strongest(even tho James clearly has the edge). And Harry did nothing wrong, so punishing him is pointless. She’s no better than fanfic Molly |
![]() ![]() ![]() This as quite the interesting piece. I really liked the idea of Harry being a much older brother to the BWL. I especially liked that the Potters and others survived healthy and whole. The explanation of how the brothers survive their encounter with Voldie, their grandmother's sacrifice, and the long-term effect of her spell was very interesting. It also left me curious about how the events following this story would go. I can't see the Basilisk stuff going anywhere close to the same direction. Thanks for writing and sharing such an interesting piece. I look forward to seeing how part two goes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I farted |
![]() ![]() ![]() still a good story though |
![]() ![]() ![]() this only goes to year one and basically nothing gets resolved except for some minor dumble bashing I would hardly put it in the "complete" category. Discontinued with a potential sequel more like. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyable story. Look forward to the next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting situation with Lily and James having an oops baby. Enjoyed the read |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story. |
![]() ![]() boring i have a good name for the borther prince |
![]() ![]() ![]() Biology says start talking about sex when kids are 11 or 12 because they can get pregnant about then. The 15 year old thing threw me a bit, are there really parents waiting that long? I hope the kid would come back with Mom gave me a book 3 years ago or school covered this twice already. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good. I liked it and look forward to reading the sequel next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A much better Harry-has-a-brother tale than most I've read. Would love to see more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful stuff. Harry makes a fantastic older brother, boi needed siblings to fuss over. |
![]() ![]() ![]() and lily's reaction to dumblrdork is utterly stupid, she only berates him thats all, instead of outing him as headmaster for attacking a student specially her son and that was only reaction to just yell she's utterly stupid |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is kinda bad compared to your other work and this is really stupid for all of his intelligence his decision making is utterly dreadful stupid instead of waiting for the aurors what this stupid do go with the flow and fight for the philosophers stone how stupid and he fucking stupidly also bought the other first year baggage so stupid, and if this is already stupid how more for the sequel |