Reviews for Older Brother
bookworm1693 chapter 5 . 1/14/2017
This is a very nice story, well thought out and written. i can'tt wait to hear how you want to play the other years.

I hope chemo therapy works out for you and that you feel better soon. Chin up and you will soldier on :)
PSay chapter 5 . 1/13/2017
I am so sorry you have to go through Chemo. I did last Jan. through Mar. Then I had radiation through July 6. I'm in remission now so I pray the same for you. I love all your stories. I have several copied on my kindle and read them about once a year. Thanks for a fun read. I love the extended siblings for Harry. Most stories he is a lonely only child. Thanks again. pms
PSay chapter 4 . 1/13/2017
This is a great way to solve the problem of the third floor. I'm glad Hermione went with them but Harry was just as good at the puzzle. I'm glad that Harry was there to fight Quirrell. That and Voldemort couldn't enter their bodies because of their grandmother's protection. Very well done. thanks for writing. pms
PSay chapter 3 . 1/12/2017
This is great. I'm so glad that Harry took care of Norbert with Fred's help. I hope no one goes after the stone. It is safe from Quirrell. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. pms
PSay chapter 2 . 1/12/2017
Things are getting more complicated but Harry is taking care of his younger brother without interfering too much. I'm glad Aaron has included Hermione and Terry with him and Neville. I look forward to how things change from now on. Thanks for writing. pms
Hikari-Pandora chapter 5 . 1/12/2017
Pretty nice story, I wish you a fulfilling new year, better health and enough strength to bear and overcome all the hardships life throws your way!
StarlightBooks609 chapter 5 . 1/9/2017
This is a really well written story. Thanks for posting it.
D0ntl00kback chapter 5 . 1/9/2017
Excellent story! I have just finished chemo and I am amazed at how exhausted I am all the time. How do you find the energy to write? I fall asleep at the infusion center but when I am able I am reading fanfiction.
I am looking forward to seeing what happens next year with an older brother on the lookout and keeping the adults in the know.
If you are like me and your head gets real cold, send me a reply with your colour scheme and I'll knit you a hat and scarf. Just let me know where to send them.
Cateagle chapter 5 . 1/6/2017
A fun story and definitely an interesting one meriting a sequel or more.

My condolences on needing chemo therapy (been through cancer myself, fortunately, it was caught early and no chemo needed) and I hope you recover fully. Meanwhile, I'd suggest getting lots of rest as the therapy does take a lot out of you.
Anoneme chapter 5 . 1/3/2017
I really like this story, though I want to smack McGonagal for being a disbelieving *****. I mean really, she was arguing with the head auror about not allowing him to investigate something dangerous he was told about by a trusted informant. I mean really, change the names of the roles to that and all of a sudden she seems... almost evil. Dumbledor didn't do anything particularly unexpected for his character or the story, but McGonagal! For cannon I don't do more than glare. Students figuring out what's hidden on the third floor corridor should at least merit checking the hallway, but I blame her being overworked at the end of the year for most of her poor thought processes that night...

You have me ranting XD. I would love reading more because what's already here is so very excellent.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/3/2017
Ok, I adore this story. Seriously, major kudos.
DODO chapter 5 . 1/3/2017
Poor horses! Standing in their own manure for weeks!
People who can only spare 1 hour every 2 month for cleaning a stable,
really should NOT keep horses (or any animal)!
Ann Jinn chapter 5 . 1/4/2017
This is a really great story. Part of me is asking for more, but I think you have a special talent of knowing when to end a story.

Best wishes.
adafrog chapter 5 . 1/2/2017
Great story so far. Thanks.
rowenasheir chapter 5 . 1/2/2017
Looking forward to year two. Dobby is going to get quite a fright with the Potter gang standing together! Will the girls corner the poor elf and sort him out?
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