| Reviews for Older Brother |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2019 Finally ! Someone write a story in potters reject headmasters suggestion and Harry was loved. Always find it ridiculous, how mother could all of suddenly stop love her son? Especially if it’s Lily Potter. |
 D.J. Scales chapter 2 . 9/5/2019 Since when do Quidditch Captains have the power to dock points? I thought only Prefects could do that. |
| D.J. Scales chapter 5 . 9/4/2019 Oh boy oh boy. |
| D.J. Scales chapter 1 . 9/4/2019 Nice start. |
| Marcus Rowland chapter 3 . 7/26/2019 Re gingerbread - if the aim is to make a gingerbread house, an obvious starting point is a real house. This has some fairly drastic consequences since gingerbread isn't nearly as strong as bricks, stone, timbers etc... I've used this in my HP/Wonder Woman crossover, but I'm sure that there are other ways it could be utilised in fanfic. |
| pikapikachuuuuuu chapter 3 . 5/22/2019 I mean, why did you even make Aaron the BWL if you're gonna make Harry do all the work anyways? Are you also gonna make voldemort battle Harry and then make Aaron come at the end to give the killing blow? You should just have made Harry the BWL then. there's so much instance where Aaron could have stood up for himself, just because the older brother is protective doesn't mean he have to intervene every time there is a problem. How are gonna make Aaron character grow if Harry resolves all the problems in the story? It doesn't work. So again, if you were gonna make Aaron a background character, then you should have just made Harry Potter the BWL. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/7/2019 Well, the only two people that could/would have done the confundus are Voldemort and Dumbledore. Neither looks good on Dumbles. |
| Human Heart chapter 6 . 3/22/2019 Yaaay! Hope you have a good day~! |
| Human Heart chapter 5 . 3/22/2019 *raises eyebrow at Lily* Eh. Nice rant tho. *eye rolls at Molly* |
| Human Heart chapter 4 . 3/22/2019 Very niiiiiice. Oh he-no, they gonna get ripped! XD. OoOoooo who done messed! |
| Human Heart chapter 3 . 3/22/2019 Mmm that was good! Thank yooooou |
| Human Heart chapter 2 . 3/21/2019 Yas, queen, proteeeeeeecc |
| Human Heart chapter 1 . 3/21/2019 Good parents! Yas, interesting. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/6/2019 Didn't like the way you brushed off Severus's feelings as a "petty high school grudge". Two chapters in, and your Dumbledore already looks like a caricature. |
| missgsmith51 chapter 4 . 2/5/2019 Remember how book Harry dealt with the Halloween troll? He stuck his wand up its nose. Well ... I would LOVE to see Lily disarm Dumbledore and - using his own wand against him, because she wouldn't want to use her own (eeeuuww!) - give him an Elder Wand High-Colonic! Doesn't it sound perfect? I think he's in need of a good flushing! I like your new twists to the story. |